Talk:Master Wato/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:18, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:18, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Japanese should not be linked per MOS:OVERLINK and similarily with Japan in the infobox and Mexico in the second sentence of the first paragraph
 * "gaing in ring experience while still training." - change to earning or correct the typo so it reads as gaining

New Japan Pro-Wrestling (2016–2018)

 * Wikilink undercard to [[Card (sports) for non-wrestling readers
 * "and primarily fought against fellow Young Lion Teruaki Kanemitsu." - shouldn't Young Lion have quotation marks for consistency's sake?
 * "in a six man tag team match." - six-man
 * Also it would be benefical to wikilink tag team to aid those unfamiliar with wrestling
 * "On April 22, 2016 Kawato won his first singles when he defeated Shota Umino." - it would help to state to clarify it was a singles match that Kawato won
 * "Kawato and Yoshitatsu defeated Kitamura and Oka in the dark match of the 2017 Wrestling Dontaku major show, but still did not work on the televised portion of the show."- The two references attach to this do not mention it was a dark match nor it was not televised. Another source is required to verify that portion of information.
 * Reference 8 should be moved to the end of the second paragraph and the note be moved to after the period of its second to last sentence
 * "where NJPW and Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) from Mexico co-promoted a number of shows in Japan." - better; Mexican-based Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL).

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2018–present)

 * "While he was working for CMLL, they also allowed Kawato San to work" - Try and use an alternative word other than "work" twice to avoid close reptition of that word
 * "He was also invited to participate in the 2018 Leyenda de Plata ("Silver Legend") tournament, one of CMLL's most prestigious tournaments." - try to avoid close reptition of the word "tournament(s)"
 * "Over the summer Kawato San and Audaz" - Please don't refer to seasons per MOS:SEASON
 * "The following week, on June 30, 2019," - unneeded space between the second comma and "2019"
 * "On November 6, 2019 it was announced" - It was announced on November 6, 2019
 * "after recovering from a knee injury" - from his
 * "At that point it was also announced that they had stripped Kawato of the CMLL World Lightweight Championship due to the injury." - better and more concise; Kawato was stripped of the CMLL World Lightweight Championship because of the injury.
 * "Over the winter Kawato San and Dulce Gardenia became involved in a storyline feud in CMLL," - same issue as the third query in this section
 * "Kawato and Gardenia both finally agreed to "bet" their hair." - better; {{xt|Both Kawato and Gardenia agreed to "bet" their hair."
 * "Over the winter Kawato San and Dulce Gardenia became involved in a storyline feud in CMLL, leading to several Lucha de Apuestas ("Bet match") challenges between the two. Kawato and Gardenia both finally agreed to "bet" their hair." - This whole portion of text will need a reliable reference since the MedioTiempo source does not mention it