Talk:Matese Legion

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Application for course page currently pending on Education noticeboardLimelightangel (talk) 08:10, 5 October 2017 (UTC)Limelightangel

Info box templates
This page needs to use the correct Infobox template for this topic. See Help:Infobox. Limelightangel (talk) 08:31, 5 October 2017 (UTC)Limelightangel

We need to get an info box from a revolutionary group and also headings and subheadings to divide the page.G1ulvia

start looking at pictures and copyright permissions because there are none in WIKICOMMONS. G1ulvia

Historical resources
You need to research and use these better. For example, see: History of the young king Francesco II of Naples https://books.google.co.uk/books?isbn=8899617074 Romualdo M. De Velazquez - 2015 - ‎Biography & Autobiography CHAPTER 12 Garibaldi and Victor Emmanuel - Protest of the legitimate government - Abandonment of the line of Volturno - Battle of Isernia; AND, at http://en.calameo.com/books/000107044bd6eb17897d5 Limelightangel (talk) 23:14, 13 November 2017 (UTC) Limelightangel

http://www.comunedipignataro.it/?p=31227 G1ulvia

http://www.guadagnifamily.com/history/volturno.html G1ulvia

Maps Battles Locations
Consider adding maps on the location of the relevant battles Limelightangel (talk) 23:14, 13 November 2017 (UTC) Limelightangel

Categories
We inserted the categories template- Sauble78 insert the relevant categories Mal01

Grammar and content
In the first section, what exactly is meant by "liberals", and how had they "developed". Sauble78

It's mentioned at the beginning that the members were split according to their country of origin. The regions are listed, but would it not be helpful to mention the two countries of origin for further clarification? Sauble78 (talk) 06:14, 28 November 2017 (UTC)


 * The only country of origin would be Italy, because all the regions listed are part of Italy. G1ulvia (talk) 17:32, 28 November 2017 (UTC)G1ulvia


 * The sentence reads "The legion was organised in two different parties referring to the volunteers country of origin" and then splits cities in two. This indicates there's two different countries; either we state what they are or this needs to be rewritten so it isn't misleading. Sauble78 (talk) 16:45, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

Could you check this sentence "confident →in← the power of his army" found in Battle of Isernia and also "tasked with the supervising" found in Significant People. G1ulvia (talk) 17:44, 28 November 2017 (UTC)G1ulvia


 * The first sentence is correct, the second has been fixed. Sauble78 (talk) 16:43, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

I put some more informations in the History could you guys please check if there is any grammar/spelling mistake? Mal01

i added some stuffs in the History and the Battle of Volturno and Isernia. Can someone check if there are any grammar mistakes? Bianchissima Nene (talk) 10:51, 30 November 2017 (UTC)