Talk:Matrilineal society of Meghalaya/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:07, 29 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * No copyvio/dablink issues
 * 1 deadlink
 * Fixed
 * Lead
 * It is "practise" not "practice"
 * Done
 * No citations needed in lead unless you say something controversial
 * Removed citations from the lead to main body with some text
 * Background
 * Khasiis are an ancient tribe "Khasi"
 * Yes, done
 * Rights, roles and responsibilities
 * The birth of a girls is celebrated while the birth of a son is accepted "girl". I think you should say "simply accepted" to emphasise the point
 * Done
 * They enjoy total security, unlike the rest of the country Sure these are the words of the source? And say "in the rest"
 * Done
 * A successful career women of this society Meaning?
 * Clarified
 * matrilocal and duolocal Meaning?
 * Wiki link for "matrilocal" and explanation for "duolocal" provided
 * The youngest daughter of this society, the Ka Khadduh, inherits the ancestral property Repeated earlier in the section. Mention this there
 * Done
 * (3,000 members[5]) Place the ref outside the bracket
 * Shifted
 *  equal rights discrimination against men Error? This part has no clear meaning
 * Corrected
 * In a Meghalaya Legislative Assembly of 60 members, there are only four women Mention the year this data pertains to
 * Year specified. Nvvchar . 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. All issues have been addressed. Please see if any more corrections are needed. Nvvchar . 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:51, 30 June 2016 (UTC)