Talk:Matt Striebel/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 23:51, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this one (and hopefully the others) tonight. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:51, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

Here's the issues:
 * "when his sister introduced him to the Brine Lightning stick." huh? introducing someone to a stick gets them involved in lacrosse?
 * Fixed, I think.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:56, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * "owner of Indoor Action Sports, in Greenfield, MA." write out Massachusetts.
 * Fixed and linked.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:48, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * "Striebel began his career in the leagues inaugural" league's
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * "in Bridgeport, CT" as above.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:50, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Article on hold. This is probably the last one I'll review because I can tell I'm getting burnt out on reviewing, let alone on reviewing very similar people repeatedly. Trying to push since there's few reviewers right now. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, GA passed. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:07, 30 October 2010 (UTC)