Talk:Matthäus Aurogallus

A couple of grammatical notes (by section): [Lead] make "Matthaus Goldhahn" bold. Philip with one final P (?); at Wittenberg UNIVERSITY (or in the town of Wittenberg?). [Early Life] Last sentence: "He WENT ON TO STUDY..." [Wittenberg and Luther] "and moveD to Wittenberg" (past tense). "During this time" - specify which time. "writing his translation" - do you really "write" translations? consider a different choice of words. "AUROGALLUS was also able to borrow rare HEBREW (?) manuscripts..." Sentence that begins "In 1540: switch the order of the two main clauses so that Aurogallus's role in the process is emphasized. "Aurogallus ATTAINED (?) the prestigious position" (I don't know if you "achieve" a position) Mbisbee (talk) 02:07, 30 March 2017 (UTC)