Talk:Matthew Platkin

UPDATED BIO
Here is a link the Attorney General Matthew J. Platkin's new bio. Can the page be updated?

https://www.njoag.gov/about/meet-attorney-general-platkin/

160.93.146.104 (talk) 18:06, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
 * If you have a conflict of interest you can use the edit COI template to request an edit to be made on the page. If you do not have a COI, WP:Be Bold and make changes you see appropriate yourself. Note that the source listed does not appear to be independent of the subject. Any changes would need to be in line with WP:ABOUTSELF. Pabsoluterince (talk) 19:16, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Proposed Changes
Text to Change: Matthew J. Platkin (born 1986/1987) is an American attorney serving as the Attorney General of the State of New Jersey.

Recommended New Text: Matthew J. Platkin (born October 13, 1986) is the 62nd Attorney General of New Jersey, appointed by Governor Phil Murphy on February 3, 2022, and confirmed by the state's Senate on September 29, 2022.

Reason for the Change: His Birthday is October 13, 1986

References supporting change:https://www.legistorm.com/person/bio/371456/Matthew_Jacob_Platkin.html

https://www.northjersey.com/story/news/state/2022/09/29/matt-platkin-nj-attorney-general-vote-phil-murphy/69528111007/

Text to Change: Platkin and his wife, Sophia, live in Montclair with their son Robert.

Recommended New Text: **Education and Personal Life:**

Born and raised in New Jersey's Morris County, Platkin attended Madison High School. He holds a Bachelor of Arts degree from Stanford University and earned his Juris Doctor from Stanford Law School, where he was an editor of the Stanford Law Review. He resides in Montclair with his wife, Sophia, and their children, Robert and Maya.

Reason for the Change: Second child was born in August 2023.

References supporting change:https://newjersey.news12.com/attorney-general-platkin-to-take-paternity-leave-after-birth-of-new-daughter

https://nj.gov/governor/news/news/562022/approved/20220203b.shtml

Recommended New Text: Prior Experience: Before his role as Attorney General, Platkin served as Chief Counsel to Governor Murphy from January 2018 to October 2020. In this position, he led a team of legal professionals who advised the Governor on legislative matters, executive orders, regulations, and litigation. He also worked in private practice, serving as a partner at Lowenstein Sandler in the areas of White-Collar Criminal Defense and Business Litigation. Earlier in his career, he was an associate at Debevoise & Plimpton in New York City, specializing in internal investigations and civil/criminal cases involving federal and state entities.

Reason for the Change: Entry missing his experience in private practice.

References supporting change:https://www.njoag.gov/about/meet-attorney-general-platkin/ 2600:1002:B153:2DF4:4050:8255:D5AA:FFDD (talk) 14:52, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

Proposed changes
Text to Change: Matthew J. Platkin (born 1986/1987) is an American attorney serving as the Attorney General of the State of New Jersey. Recommended New Text: Matthew J. Platkin (born October 13, 1986) is the 62nd Attorney General of New Jersey, appointed by Governor Phil Murphy on February 3, 2022, and confirmed by the state's Senate on September 29, 2022. Reason for the Change: His Birthday is October 13, 1986 References supporting change:https://www.legistorm.com/person/bio/371456/Matthew_Jacob_Platkin.html https://www.northjersey.com/story/news/state/2022/09/29/matt-platkin-nj-attorney-general-vote-phil-murphy/69528111007/ Text to Change: Platkin and his wife, Sophia, live in Montclair with their son Robert. Recommended New Text: **Education and Personal Life:** Born and raised in New Jersey's Morris County, Platkin attended Madison High School. He holds a Bachelor of Arts degree from Stanford University and earned his Juris Doctor from Stanford Law School, where he was an editor of the Stanford Law Review. He resides in Montclair with his wife, Sophia, and their children, Robert and Maya. Reason for the Change: Second child was born in August 2023. References supporting change:https://newjersey.news12.com/attorney-general-platkin-to-take-paternity-leave-after-birth-of-new-daughter https://nj.gov/governor/news/news/562022/approved/20220203b.shtml Recommended New Text: Prior Experience: Before his role as Attorney General, Platkin served as Chief Counsel to Governor Murphy from January 2018 to October 2020. In this position, he led a team of legal professionals who advised the Governor on legislative matters, executive orders, regulations, and litigation. He also worked in private practice, serving as a partner at Lowenstein Sandler in the areas of White-Collar Criminal Defense and Business Litigation. Earlier in his career, he was an associate at Debevoise & Plimpton in New York City, specializing in internal investigations and civil/criminal cases involving federal and state entities. Reason for the Change: Entry missing his experience in private practice. References supporting change:https://www.njoag.gov/about/meet-attorney-general-platkin/ 2600:4040:A2DC:BB00:48AE:C708:848:F385 (talk) 01:14, 12 September 2023 (UTC)

Reply 12-SEP-2023

 * Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly. The citation style predominantly used by the Matthew Platkin article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.) In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:

Bare URL reference formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

References

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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Matthew Platkin article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:

Citation Style 1 formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. Which displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 1. ^ Harinath, Prisha. (2020)., Science, 51(78):46. ^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 2. 

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Proposed Changes
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Text to Change: Matthew J. Platkin (born 1986/1987) is an American attorney serving as the Attorney General of the State of New Jersey.

Recommended New Text: Matthew J. Platkin (born October 13, 1986) is the 62nd Attorney General of New Jersey, appointed by Governor Phil Murphy on February 3, 2022, and confirmed by the state's Senate on September 29, 2022.

Reason for the Change: His Birthday is October 13, 1986

References supporting change: "Matt Platkin nominated for NJ Attorney General, likely to get swift Senate vote.” NorthJersey.com. September 29, 2022. Accessed September 14, 2023. https://www.northjersey.com/story/news/state/2022/09/29/matt-platkin-nj-attorney-general-vote-phil-murphy/69528111007/" Text to Change: Platkin and his wife, Sophia, live in Montclair with their son Robert.

Recommended New Text: **Education and Personal Life:**

Born and raised in New Jersey's Morris County, Platkin attended Madison High School. He holds a Bachelor of Arts degree from Stanford University and earned his Juris Doctor from Stanford Law School, where he was an editor of the Stanford Law Review. He resides in Montclair with his wife, Sophia, and their children, Robert and Maya.

Reason for the Change: Second child was born in August 2023.

References supporting change: "Attorney General Platkin to Take Paternity Leave After Birth of New Daughter.' News 12 New Jersey. URL: https://newjersey.news12.com/attorney-general-platkin-to-take-paternity-leave-after-birth-of-new-daughter (Accessed on September 14, 2023)." Recommended New Text: Prior Experience: Before his role as Attorney General, Platkin served as Chief Counsel to Governor Murphy from January 2018 to October 2020. In this position, he led a team of legal professionals who advised the Governor on legislative matters, executive orders, regulations, and litigation. He also worked in private practice, serving as a partner at Lowenstein Sandler in the areas of White-Collar Criminal Defense and Business Litigation. Earlier in his career, he was an associate at Debevoise & Plimpton in New York City, specializing in internal investigations and civil/criminal cases involving federal and state entities.

Reason for the Change: Entry missing his experience in private practice.

References supporting change: Meet Attorney General Platkin.” Office of the Attorney General of New Jersey. URL: https://www.njoag.gov/about/meet-attorney-general-platkin/ (Accessed on September 14, 2023). 2600:1002:B156:2E7C:CDEC:3C55:49A7:F404 (talk) 19:47, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

Proposed Changes
Text to Change: Matthew J. Platkin (born 1986/1987) is an American attorney serving as the Attorney General of the State of New Jersey. Recommended New Text: Matthew J. Platkin (born October 13, 1986) is the 62nd Attorney General of New Jersey, appointed by Governor Phil Murphy on February 3, 2022, and confirmed by the state's Senate on September 29, 2022. Reason for the Change: His Birthday is October 13, 1986 References supporting change: Matt Platkin nominated for NJ Attorney General, likely to get swift Senate vote.” NorthJersey.com. September 29, 2022. Accessed September 14, 2023. https://www.northjersey.com/story/news/state/2022/09/29/matt-platkin-nj-attorney-general-vote-phil-murphy/69528111007/ Text to Change: Platkin and his wife, Sophia, live in Montclair with their son Robert. Recommended New Text:**Education and Personal Life:** Born and raised in New Jersey's Morris County, Platkin attended Madison High School. He holds a Bachelor of Arts degree from Stanford University and earned his Juris Doctor from Stanford Law School, where he was an editor of the Stanford Law Review. He resides in Montclair with his wife, Sophia, and their children, Robert and Maya. Reason for the Change: Second child was born in August 2023. References supporting change: Attorney General Platkin to Take Paternity Leave After Birth of New Daughter." News 12 New Jersey. URL: https://newjersey.news12.com/attorney-general-platkin-to-take-paternity-leave-after-birth-of-new-daughter (Accessed on September 14, 2023). Recommended New Text: Prior Experience: Before his role as Attorney General, Platkin served as Chief Counsel to Governor Murphy from January 2018 to October 2020. In this position, he led a team of legal professionals who advised the Governor on legislative matters, executive orders, regulations, and litigation. He also worked in private practice, serving as a partner at Lowenstein Sandler in the areas of White-Collar Criminal Defense and Business Litigation. Earlier in his career, he was an associate at Debevoise & Plimpton in New York City, specializing in internal investigations and civil/criminal cases involving federal and state entities. Reason for the Change: Entry missing his experience in private practice. References supporting change: Meet Attorney General Platkin.” Office of the Attorney General of New Jersey. URL: https://www.njoag.gov/about/meet-attorney-general-platkin/ (Accessed on September 14, 2023). 2600:1002:B162:EF73:84D:AAEA:344E:959C (talk) 16:09, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

Reply 20-SEP-2023

 * Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly. Please note that this is the second time this issue has been brought to your attention. The citation style predominantly used by the Matthew Platkin article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.) In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:

Bare URL reference formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,<sup id="nbFoot01a" class="reference">[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<sup id="nbFoot02a" class="reference">[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.<sup id="nbFoot03a" class="reference">[3]

References

1. 2.  3.

In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Matthew Platkin article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:

<blockquote style="background:white;width:95%; padding:1em; border:1px solid #999;">Citation Style 1 formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. Which displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,<sup id="nbFoot01a" class="reference">[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<sup id="nbFoot02a" class="reference">[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.<sup id="nbFoot03a" class="reference">[3]

References

<li id="noteFoot01a" >^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 1.</li> <li id="noteFoot02a" >^ Harinath, Prisha. (2020)., Science, 51(78):46.</li> <li id="noteFoot03a" >^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 2.</li> </ol>

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such as yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly submit a new edit request below at your earliest convenience, taking care to ensure that it makes use of CS1. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo  19:55, 20 September 2023 (UTC)