Talk:Matthias W. Day

GA hold issues
Sumoeagle179 20:17, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) lead is way too short, only one sentence, it should summarize the article
 * 2) very little on his pre-West Point life, needs expanded
 * 3) footnotes usually come after punctuation, not in the middle of a sentence
 * 4) Footnote one points to the flipper article, it is not a reference
 * 5) the quote at the bottom of the his class needs a ref
 * 6) the narrative footnotes are confusing to follow
 * 7) full dates need wikilinked
 * 8) red links should be removed
 * 9) solo years don't get linked
 * 10) find more refs is possible and link more things, like LA could be linked

Ryan?
Why does the lead refer to him as Ryan? Was it copied from somewhere else or what?  — Rlevse • Talk  • 13:59, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I can't remember exactly. No one has caught this before though, which is odd.  Corrections made.   Broken Sphere Msg me 20:00, 12 April 2009 (UTC)