Talk:Maurice Suckling/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:59, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:59, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * The lede is excessively detailed. I suggest dropping the ship's names.
 * Done.


 * Clarify that poverty prevented him from joining the Army and lack of education the clergy.
 * Done, although I wouldn't quite call it poverty!


 * Having subsequently continued in Burford, This seems redundant
 * Removed.


 * Any reason given for the translation from Burford to Russell? No promotion involved and not a more prestigious ship, AFAIK.
 * Nothing in particular. Would assume needs of the service, the death of a lieutenant opening a spot that needed to be filled or similar.


 * Link decommissioning
 * Already linked in early career section.


 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:32, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, thanks for taking this! Responses above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 11:48, 28 November 2022 (UTC)