Talk:Mauricio Pellegrino

Current position
The infobox says that he's at Inter, the article states that he's at Liverpool. He can't be at both. d a n n o 02:14, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

Copy edit
This article still needs a complete overhaul and was clearly written by a non-native English speaker. It would probably be quicker to say what is correct, but the following phrases/sentences are not good use of English:


 * 1) After playing nearly one decade with
 * 2) he spent the vast majority of his remaining career
 * 3) amassing La Liga totals
 * 4) with which he won
 * 5) he conquered nine in his spell in his country (I have no idea what that means)
 * 6) had a six-month stint
 * 7) he embarked in a managerial career
 * 8) during a large portion of the 90's
 * 9) lived its golden era
 * 10) He had his first abroad experience
 * 11) would be fairly used during the campaign
 * 12) ended with league conquest
 * 13) with the addition of
 * 14) His main dark spot
 * 15) he was a very important defensive unit
 * 16) amassed 213 official appearances
 * 17) having an unassuming stint
 * 18) picked for the squad
 * 19) made his debut precisely
 * 20) stayed connected
 * 21) who still had Benítez in charge
 * 22) a position in which he remained
 * 23) as the pair moved
 * 24) as the team had just promoted to the top flight
 * 25) he qualified the team for the final
 * 26) a 1–0 aggregate defeat

I am probably being rather picky, but there are several other sentences which are sloppily written.77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:58, 20 June 2017 (UTC)

Honours list
As the article makes reference to the large number of titles that he has won as a player, it would be good to have this added to the article (properly referenced of course). 77.130.195.16 (talk) 05:59, 20 June 2017 (UTC)