Talk:Mauritius women's national football team/GA2

GA Reassessment
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I will be reassessing this article to determine whether it still meets the Good Article criteria. Any user is encouraged to assist in improving the article to keep it up to GA standards. Thanks. PCN02WPS ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 20:54, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * "As of 2012 the head coach is Yves-Pierre Bodineau" → recommend replacing with "Since 2012", given that "as of" sounds like the information was correct at the last point someone checked rather than that the information has been correct since that time
 * Not sure about this. Probably better to remove it. See summary/extract of a source on the Talk page. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:46, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

History

 * "In 1985, almost no country in the world had a women's national football team" → "In 1985, very few countries had a women's national football team"
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)


 * "As of January 2013, the team had not played in, nor have they scheduled, any FIFA sanctioned matches." → this statement needs updating, as it is potentially nine years out of date. Also I believe "FIFA-sanctioned" needs a hyphen and FIFA should be linked here
 * Removed. Some cited info can be hopefully be added later. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)


 * "Mauritius was scheduled to compete in several competitions" → repetitive, I'd suggest "take part in" instead of "compete"
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)


 * "The list includes the 2002 Confederation of Southern African Football Associations women's tournament in Harare, Zimbabwe from which they withdrew" → the abbreviation for COSAFA is already given in the link so it can be used here.
 * "In 2005, Zambia was supposed to host a regional Council of Southern Africa Football Associations (COSAFA) women's football tournament" → just use "COSAFA" here, same reason as above
 * Amended - changed link, reatined "(COSAFA)" in body text at first mention. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Any reason why Seychelles women's national football team is not linked in the list of teams?
 * "losing all three matches in their Group" → group should be lowercase
 * Amended per the two points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)


 * "As of 2012, the head coach was Alain Jules" → this contradicts with the lead and infobox, which state that the head coach is Yves-Pierre Bodineau
 * "As of March 2012, the team was not ranked in the world by FIFA, as it had not yet participated in any matches against other FIFA members. By June 2020, they were bottom of the FIFA rankings" → Are they ranked or not? These two sentences contradict

Recruitment and organisation

 * First paragraph is not specific to Mauritius
 * "As of 2009, there was no national or regional women's competition but a school competition existed" → Potentially 13 years out of date
 * "none of them played even one international match" → unnecessary stress here, just say "none of them played an international match"
 * "10% of the money from the FIFA Financial Assistance Programme" → avoid starting a sentence with a figure per MOS:NUMNOTES; suggest changing "10%" to "Ten percent"
 * "FIFA Financial Assistance Programme (FAP)" → "FAP" abbreviation is not used again, and therefore does not need to be given here
 * "Between 1991 and 2010 in Mauritius, there was no FIFA FUTURO III regional course for women's coaching, no women's football seminar held in the country and no FIFA MA course held for women/youth football" → no information or context is given as to what "FIFA FUTURO III" and "FIFA MA" are

Results and fixtures

 * Sole meaningful content in this section is an inappropriate external link
 * Moved the link to "External links". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:53, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Players

 * "The following players were named on date month year for the xxx tournament. tournament" → for the what?
 * "Caps and goals accurate up to and including 30 October 2021" → not accurate since nothing is listed

Records

 * "*Active players in bold, statistics correct as of 31 August 2021" → again not accurate because the information being referred to here is not presented