Talk:Mauser Model 1893/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:07, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 03:07, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

Lead
 * The last sentence of the 1st para - mentions flush with bottom of stock/rifle twice.
 * Fixed

Development
 * A few terms could be linked, e.g. box magazine, stock (firearms), extractor (firearms), bolt (firearms)
 * Done

Description
 * "As was standard for Mauser rifles, a three-position safety...": suggest "As was standard for Mauser rifles, the M1893 was configured with a three-position safety..." or something similar
 * Good idea
 * "...did not include a third, rear locking lug, which was introduced with the Model 1895." The notes that end this sentence are out of order
 * Fixed

Derivatives
 * "M1894 rifles were also sold to Brazil, chambered in 7&n mm,...": please check the dimensions for the round
 * Fixed, good catch

Ottoman variant
 * "Most all of these rifles still..": Needs to be rephrased depending on whether all rifles or most of them were rebarrelled
 * Fixed.

References
 * Hamilton is not in alphabetical order
 * No, the one before is "de" and the one after is "Peterson"
 * Westwood doesn't seem to be cited at all
 * He is - FN 26
 * Whoops, how did I miss that...Zawed (talk) 07:42, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

Other stuff Will check back in a few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:44, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Image tags seem appropriate
 * No dupe links
 * No dab links
 * External links check out OK
 * Thanks, Zawed. Parsecboy (talk) 14:49, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 07:42, 14 March 2018 (UTC)