Talk:Max Bentele

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This whole entry lacks of specific sources, reads more like an advertisement or the reference to a deity. Especially the last section "IMPACT" is borderline comical. Can an expert attribute some sources to some of these claims? Not just references at the bottom of the article but individual references in the actual paragraphs?

Thanks! -CyRo —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cyberroach (talk • contribs) 17:18, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I took out a lot of stuff from the impact section that didn't have any references and were like that. If anyone has a reference with something to contribute then that would be great and you could bring some of it back. Cleanelephant (talk) 22:40, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * That stuff, as basic claims, is pretty easy to reference (try the Society of Automotive Engineers journal, or even just his autobiog as a SPS), but the tone beforehand was awful and we're better off without it. Andy Dingley (talk) 23:53, 14 December 2011 (UTC)