Talk:Max Blumenthal/Archive 2

VENEZUELA: Unexplained deletion of cited text
, your reasoning for blanking cited text on Blumenthal's use of Venezuela's state-funded Telesur (TV channel) to source a story, please? Thanks, Sandy Georgia (Talk)  18:33, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 * There's nothing about Telesur in that text. As I explained in the first place, it was WP:UNDUE emphasis on a third party political opinion. Pretty much anything from that Atlantic screed belongs in the "Controversy" section.GPRamirez5 (talk) 22:46, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Atlantic screed ? I do not know what that references; please explain.  Both sources mention Telesur, and the text you deleted included the sourced mentions of Telesur.  Would you like me to translate (or you can run the Spanish article through a translator); I can if needed.  It is not "undue emphasis on a third party"; it is Blumenthal citing a source which is well known to a)  be state propaganda, of b) the worst type because the lies, as in this case, are designed to incriminate-- and then building the entire premise of the article around a falsehood (the photo).  So, if you could explain "atlantic screed", explain where you don't see Telesur, let me know if you want me to translate, we can try to put the pieces together in a way that works.  Thanks, Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  23:21, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Actually,, from your diff above, I think you are responding to the wrong deletion (you made two), and not referencing the deletion I am talking about. I know nothing of the text you deleted at the top; could you please review what you deleted at the bottom of this text? Perhaps we have a misunderstanding.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  23:29, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
 * OR better, I'll make it easier for you-- text below. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  23:32, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

I concur with, not sure why this was removed. Placing sourced information back.ZiaLater ( talk ) 03:42, 27 February 2019 (UTC)


 * So we have Blumenthal's WP:PRIMARY source with no independent indication of significance, and a secondary source which doesn't mention Blumenthal at all? Do I have that correct? Please include reliable sources which directly support either:
 * This one story is significant to understanding Blumenthal
 * This photographer's rebuttal is significant to Blumenthal
 * Without either of these it's not clear why this is being mentioned at all. This is verging on WP:COATRACK territory. We're not here to compile examples of his work, we should summarize what reliable sources say about his work. Grayfell (talk) 04:08, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

Well, Blumenthal wrote it for Telesur as well, including the controversial images. What do you think ?ZiaLater ( talk ) 15:13, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I have rewritten the text to reflect the issue raised by Grayfell. (See below, Venezuela 2) Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  18:44, 27 February 2019 (UTC)


 * I recommend changing from "Venezuelan journalist Karla Salcedo Flores who claimed that she had taken the photos and said that Telesur had misused her photos for propaganda purposes after the network claimed protesters burned the supply vehicles" → "Venezuelan journalist Karla Salcedo Flores who stated that she had taken the photos and said that Telesur had misused her photos for propaganda purposes after the network reported protesters burned the supply vehicles".ZiaLater ( talk ) 19:56, 27 February 2019 (UTC)


 * Concur. There are messes galore in this article.  Someone needs to do some basic cleanup and checking and dead link repair. Since most are missing authors or dead links, it's difficult to assess how deep the problems are and how much is primary sourced.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:48, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

Venezuela
Blumenthal wrote an article for Grayzone entitled "Burning Aid: An Interventionist Deception on Colombia-Venezuela Bridge?" about clashes on 23 February 2019 on the Colombia–Venezuela border during the 2019 Venezuelan presidential crisis. In the article, he questioned whether "Sen. Marco Rubio and coup leaders" may have engaged in deception. He partly based his analysis on what he called photographs from Venezuela's state-run Telesur that allegedly showed an opposition protestor throwing a molotov cocktail at one of the trucks that was burned while attempting to deliver humanitarian aid to Venezuela. Blumenthal wrote: "Telesur reporter Madelein Garcia published photographs showing a guarimbero with a gas canister next to one of the burning trucks." La Patilla published a series of tweets from Venezuelan journalist Karla Salcedo Flores who claimed that she had taken the photos and said that Telesur had misused her photos for propaganda purposes after the network claimed protesters burned the supply vehicles. La Patilla reported on tweets where Salcedo Flores said she saw young people with water that they were using to try to douse the flames, not what Telesur was reporting and what Blumenthal re-reported.

Venezuela 2
Blumenthal wrote an article for Venezuela's state-run Telesur entitled "Quemando la ayuda: ¿un engaño intervencionista en el puente Colombia-Venezuela?" (Burning Aid: An Interventionist Deception on Colombia-Venezuela Bridge?) about clashes on 23 February 2019 on the Colombia–Venezuela border during the 2019 Venezuelan presidential crisis. In the article, he questioned whether what he called "Sen. Marco Rubio and coup leaders" may have engaged in deception, based partly on what he called photographs from Venezuela's state-run Telesur that allegedly showed an opposition protestor throwing a molotov cocktail at a truck that was burned during attempts to deliver humanitarian aid to Venezuela. Blumenthal wrote in the Telesur article: "Telesur reporter Madelein Garcia published photographs showing a guarimbero with a gas canister next to one of the burning trucks." La Patilla and other sources published a series of tweets from Venezuelan journalist Karla Salcedo Flores who claimed that she had taken the photos and alleged that her photos were misused for propaganda purposes. La Patilla reported on tweets where Salcedo Flores said that what she saw and photographed was young people with water that they were using to try to douse the flames, not what Telesur reported.

Incorrect claim
This section is presently false. Blumenthal did not write the article in question for TeleSUR. He wrote the article for his website, The Grayzone, and then TeleSUR later republished it after the fact. It is false to claim he "wrote an article for Venezuela's state-run Telesur," as the article says right now. That is objectively not true. This article needs to be corrected using the "Venezuela 1" draft above. SpiritofIFStone (talk) 21:01, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

Venezuela: NYT confirms Blumenthal's reporting was correct
The New York Times has published a report confirming that what Blumenthal reported at his website The Grayzone was correct: https://www.nytimes.com/2019/03/10/world/americas/venezuela-aid-fire-video.html This section must now be updated and corrected. SpiritofIFStone (talk) 16:54, 10 March 2019 (UTC)

Lead
The following information in the lead is consistently being deleted and I've yet to hear a reasonable explanation:"He was awarded the 2014 Lannan Foundation Cultural Freedom Notable Book Award for his book Goliath: Life and Loathing in Greater Israel. He was formerly a writer for The Daily Beast, Al Akhbar, and Media Matters for America, as well as a Fellow of the Nation Institute. He is the author of three books, one of which, Republican Gomorrah: Inside the Movement that Shattered the Party (2009), appeared on The New York Times bestsellers list."GPRamirez5 (talk) 01:15, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry can't help with an explanation. I didn't understand the various reasons either. It seems like a reasonable biographical summary and I can't fault the sources. I have seen similar lede's on other pages. I think someone mentioned that the Lannan award was in the main body and so didn't need to be in the lede which does not make sense to me. Another comment suggested providing independent sources but again I am not sure what this was referring to.Burrobert (talk) 02:26, 10 March 2019 (UTC)

, when you use refs on a talk page, could you please remember to add ? Could you also explain why you keep deleting that Blumenthal was a former writer for AlterNet, while leaving other outlets that he formerly wrote for? Sandy Georgia (Talk)  19:30, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * , I didn't delete him as "a former writer for Alternet". Your formulation had him as a current senior writer at a Alternet, which is false.GPRamirez5 (talk) 19:53, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * I am not seeing that: Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  09:26, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Forgive me my liege! That wasn't you, that was ZiaLater who repeatedly reinserted the falsehood.GPRamirez5 (talk) 12:54, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

The last sentence in the lead is awkward and mildly POV. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.152.106.102 (talk) 01:49, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

Synthesis et al
I have removed this text for discussion, due to several problems (generally WP:SYNTH:
 * The New York Times subsequently published a report demonstrating that Maduro's forces had not burned the aid convoy, and the opposition militants were to blame. Glen Greenwald and The Intercept praised Blumenthal for exposing Trump administration "fake news" on Venezuela.

Lots wrong with the lack of neutrality in how these two sentences are written, and since the NYT piece makes NO connection with Blumenthal and the Salcedo Flores matter, it is synth to use it. Please try to re-write these sentences more neutrally and without SYNTH. What the Intercept writes about Blumenthal makes NO connection whatsover to Blumenthal using an allegedgly plagiarized and/or falsified photo, and connecting these two issues via the NYT piece, when the NYT piece does not even discuss this, is SYNTH. Please write more neutrally about what the Intercept says, without synthesizing to connect the two matters. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  19:33, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) The New York Times mentions neither Blumenthal nor Madeleine Garcia nor Karla Salcedo Flores, and makes no connection with the alleged plagiarized/falsified photo used by Blumenthal/Garcia as alleged by the original photographer, Salcedo Flores.
 * 2) The NYT did not demonstrate anything, they suggested; please read it carefully.
 * 3) Next we have someone "praising" Blumenthal; I don't see "praise", this is not neutrally worded, and the new report, again, makes no mention that Blumenthal's report used an allegedly falsified photo, independently (maybe) of the photos analyzed by the NYT.  Apples and oranges here are being used to "praise" Blumenthal, with a good measure of SYNTH that ignores/overlooks the original problem with his reporting, which was the use of an allegedly falsified photo.  According to the photojournalist who took the photo.
 * 4) And finally, we don't know if the NYT analyzed different photos, or the allegedly plagiarized photos.
 * No, it is very obviously not WP:SYNTH because:


 * 1) There is no claim here that the Times mentions Blumenthal—that is why there is no reference to Blumenthal in the sentence which cites the Times.  It is, however, very germane to the incident which Telesur covered in the previous paragraph.
 * 2) Blumenthal is praised for exposing fake news by Greenwald, as any reasonable person reading the article can see, and it is an accurate summary to say so.GPRamirez5 (talk) 20:10, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Please try to craft more neutral and less synthy text, reflecting what the NYT actually said, and watch your edit summaries. One thing is Blumenthal reporting from plagiarized, misrepresented photos, and a whole 'nother thing is The Intercept's reporting on Blumenthal.  Stick to the facts.  Telesur/Blumenthal reported on one image whose author says it was misrepresented; we don't know if the NYT also used that image or knew its history.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:18, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * User:SandyGeorgia, please familiarize yourself with the WP explanatory page “What SYNTH is Not”
 * You can begin with this section: SYNTH is not an advocacy tool. If someone doesn't like what was said, and they therefore cry SYNTH, others almost certainly will be right to cry foul. Virtually anything can be shoehorned into a broad reading of SYNTH, but the vast majority of it shouldn't be. GPRamirez5 (talk) 20:25, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * The New York Times subsequently published a report demonstrating that Maduro's forces had not burned the aid convoy, and the opposition militants were to blame. By using the word "subsequently" here, your text linked it to the previous incident. The New York Times did not mention Blumenthal, has nothing to do with Blumenthal's use of the allegedly falsified photo, and doesn't belong in this article.  [Glen Greenwald]] and The Intercept praised Blumenthal for exposing Trump administration "fake news" on Venezuela.|undefined  I suspect that by focusing on the task at hand, you can write a more neutral and accurate summary of the Intercept statements, taking into account our previous knowledge about the allegedly falsified photos. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:45, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Further, you added the NYT below the plagiarism allegation with the edit summary, "NY Times supports Maduro version", which gives the appearance that you did not recognize that the earlier story is unrelated, and about Blumenthal relying on an allegedly falsified photo. The synth is revealed in this edit summary, where you are trying to connect the two events.  Would you like to propose an attempt at neutral wording of The Intercept, or would you prefer that I do it?  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  21:24, 10 March 2019 (UTC)

SandyGeorgia is citing a couple of obscure Venezuelan opposition newspapers in Spanish that are known for promoting fake news about this incident to imply that Blumenthal is guilty of some sort of misconduct in his entirely accurate reporting on Venezuela (and possibly to reject the findings of the gold-standard RS The New York Times), even though neither of her sources mention Blumenthal AT ALL. She has egregiously violated WP:BLP by forcing these unsourced, scurrilous smears into this article while simultaneously falsely invoking SYNTH in a failed attempt to exclude the fact that Blumenthal's analysis has been proven true. This egregious misconduct, which should be sanctionable, raises massive red flags about what else this extremely prolific editor may be doing to skew Wikipedia's coverage of the ongoing crisis in Venezuela.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 23:09, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Please watch your edit summaries and personalization of discussions; if you have a point, you should be able to make it without personal attacks. I am hoping you will finish fixing the WP:COATRACK that you left in the article.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  23:37, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
 * WP:COATRACK is actually a description of what you dumped on the Venezuela section in the first place, Sandy Georgia. And a person who coatracks, falsely cries SYNTH, and violates WP:BLP is demonstrating a pattern of personal behavior that invites strong and justified criticism.GPRamirez5 (talk) 10:37, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

Trujillo
I suggest you to self revert since there are active measures in the article against more than a single revert per 24 hours. You have not provided sources supporting your claim, and even then the edit summary doesn't justify the removal of content since its intent is not to "refute" The New York Times, but rather to show the point of view of one of the parties involved. --Jamez42 (talk) 18:52, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 * This is BLP violating WP:SYNTH. We're not going to cherry-pick self-serving statements from primary sources like the Colombian foreign minister with no direct relation to the subject of this article in order to create a pointless "he-said, she-said" quote farm WP:COATRACK in which objective truth is unknowable and politicians and anti-Maduro activists are given equal weight to RS like The New York Times. You're embarrassing yourself and your cause with this behavior. "You have not provided sources supporting your claim." What are you talking about? You're the one making a claim; that's why you added a source to the article. According to Google translate, this is what your own source states:

The Colombian Foreign Minister, Carlos Holmes Trujillo, denied on Tuesday March 12 that his government manipulated a video that picked up the fire from a convoy with humanitarian aid to Venezuela and insisted that everything happened on 23 February was the responsibility of the Executive of Nicolás Maduro, reviewed EFE.

"Absolute falsehood," Trujillo said when asked about an information in the New York Times, according to which a video of the incident distributed by Colombia would be manipulated, by removing a part that indicates that the fire could be caused by demonstrators from the opposition.

According to the Colombian minister, "everything that happened that day is a consequence of the dictator Maduro [bold in original], the usurper Maduro, prevented by violence that Venezuela's humanitarian aid needed by thousands and thousands of Venezuelan brothers," said the note.
 * Are you hoping that no-one will check Spanish-language sources to see if you are accurately summarizing them? Either way, you can get off on a technicality because your edit, while misleading, doesn't actually say that Trujillo says that Maduro's troops started the fire: Something that Trujillo was rather careful not to say, and doubtless would have said if he could still say it. Or will you protest that my analysis of this primary source is itself WP:OR? Editorial discretion is permitted on talk pages, but in any case that's why you shouldn't be wading through primary-sourced propaganda to synthesize an alternative narrative to that found in RS.


 * tl;dr? A government official crying "fake news!" at RS isn't notable. We don't need "Colombia's response" to factual reporting, except possibly when it comes to the assertion that Colombia's government edited the footage, which was not made by Blumenthal and can possibly be omitted altogether.


 * But, yeah, since you're threatening sanctions based on technicalities, I can let this poorly-sourced, disputed content that you are edit warring into a BLP without consensus sit for another hour. We'll see how well that works out for you.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 20:49, 10 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Geez, was that overly aggressive tone really needed? Things such as "You're embarrassing yourself" and "you shouldn't be wading through primary-sourced propaganda" are out of line. Claiming that I have a "cause" or an ulterior motive for editing, or that I "hoped that no-one would check Spanish-language sources", isn't helpful either. You're clearly not assuming good faith and I would ask that you please don't personalize messages in the future. Several guidelines have been quoted and most of them aren't precisely accurate. I'm not sure why BLP is being cited since there aren't particularly defamatory or even negative claims against Blumenthal, and the content in question is sourced. This doesn't seem to be a case of WP:SYNTH because there not a conclusion being drawn directly from the reference, and neither of WP:COATRACK because the content included is directly related to the paragraph, besides that it would constitute only a minority of it.


 * That being said, the most important thing is that you have not explained why the reference provided is an unreliable or a primary source, unless you mean that the NYT is "more" reliable than El Pitazo and because of that it shouldn't be included. Neither have you explained why quoting a government official isn't notable. Only a single statement is being included per WP:NPOV, far from a "'he-said, she-said' quote farm WP:COATRACK" or referencing every single "politician or anti-Maduro activist". Juan Guaidó was also asked about the NYT and he responded that the article didn't provide a definite conclusion and that three trucks were burned that day, while the article only focuses in a single one, but in my opinion quoting him in the main space would truly be coatracking.


 * The addition main purpose is to show that a party involved in the event refuted the claims, nothing more. NTN24, the outlet whose journalist first made the claim that Maduro burned the aid, offered a rebuttal too. We could work out the wording, but it isn't a reason to remove all the content, edit war or insult. --Jamez42 (talk) 16:14, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Jamesz42, it seems to me that your proposed edit—"However, Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo rejected the claims by The New York Times and insisted that Nicolás Maduro was responsible"–is an overly broad summary that misrepresents the primary thrust of your own source by implying that Trujillo produced a substantive refutation of the reporting in The New York Times. To the contrary, as quoted above, Trujillo strongly denied that his government edited the footage, calling it "absolute falsehood," and then added that Maduro was ultimately responsible for whatever happened that day either way—a meaningless and unfalsifiable bit of political spin that adds no encyclopedic value to this article. Because your addition is SYNTH (which hardly reduces your WP:BURDEN to gain consensus before reinstating disputed content to a BLP) it may be possible for you to deny the implication, but you are clearly trying to discredit Blumenthal's reporting as well as that of the NYT with this official statement from a government with a huge ax to grind against Venezuela, even though there is no "controversy" here in RS: You have not provided any RS that refute the NYT and Blumenthal, and I assume that you would not be relying on vague talking points supplied by the Colombian foreign minister if you could cite RS instead, yet you seek to diminish the RS reporting on this incident by reducing it to mere "claims," followed by counter-claims. If this precedent is accepted, then the floodgates would be open and it is likely that the entire section and article would devolve into an unencyclopedic "he said, she said" QUOTEFARM imparting no useful information to readers in relatively short order.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 18:55, 11 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Once again I'd ask to stop personalization and not to assume bad faith against me and not to claim that I'm "clearly trying to discredit Blumenthal's reporting" or the NYT's, my additions have been only according to WP:NPOV and they aren't attacks in any way. I included the NTN24 article that I mentioned, hoping that the original outlet that reported on the burning trucks is considered a RS. Cheers. --Jamez42 (talk) 14:53, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Your new source (the reliability of which is very much in question after this incident) is a three-paragraph-long summary of the NYT report in Spanish, based on no new investigative reporting. Nothing in this source (besides the title "Is the New York Times version of the burning of humanitarian aid believable?," which does not reflect the body of the text) even questions, let alone "rebuts," the NYT's conclusions. I'm honestly not sure how you could think that your description of this source as "a rebuttal to the New York Times article" is accurate. It's just a short summary ("The New York Times ignites the controversy in Venezuela by ridding Nicolás Maduro's regime of blame for the burning of humanitarian aid on February 23, when they tried to enter the country's trucks with food and medicine and Maduro ordered the blockade blocked. An investigation by the US newspaper suggests that the fire was accidentally generated by demonstrators affected by the interim president, Juan Guaidó," per Google Translate) combined with a small amount of political commentary/spin at the end. Assuming good faith, I would have to assume that you are basing your description on the one sentence that repeats the familiar talking point that "whatever happened, Maduro is still ultimately to blame"—or, as the source puts it, "The truth is that Maduro kept his promise not to let humanitarian aid into Venezuela, making a security deployment at the border posts with the Bolivarian National Police and the so-called collectives"—but this, again, does not constitute a meaningful "rebuttal" to highly-reliable NYT reporting.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 20:50, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

As I stated in my edit summary, the reference consists in a 48 minute long special produced by NTN24, far from the "three-paragraph-long summary". --Jamez42 (talk) 21:20, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
 * (EC): Now Jamez42 is saying that the "rebuttal" is actually contained in an attached 48-minute-long video in Spanish, rather than the text in question. It's impossible for me to verify this claim, although there is plenty of reason to be skeptical of both Jamez42 and Venezuelan opposition media such as NTN24 with a history of promoting fake news about this incident. What seems beyond dispute is that none of this has anything to do with Max Blumenthal, ostensibly the subject of this BLP, because the alleged "rebuttals" by the Colombian foreign minister and NTN24 do not mention Blumenthal and because Jamez42 stated above that he is not citing them in order to discredit Blumenthal's reporting on Venezuela (which would be SYNTH). To the contrary, Jamez42 maintains that since this article cites Greenwald as commenting that the NYT vindicates Blumenthal, it should also include other notable commentary on the NYT article in question, including from Venezuelan opposition media that initially misreported these events. In my opinion, this would be wrong on multiple levels: First, even the NYT would not be cited here without a secondary source (The Intercept) tying it to Blumenthal (and even with a secondary source, Jamez42's frequent collaborator SandyGeorgia still tried to keep it out by crying SYNTH); why, then, should NTN24's alleged "rebuttal" be included without a secondary source mentioning it in relation to Blumenthal's reporting? Furthermore, it really is farcical to suggest that, under Wikipedia policy, NTN24 is considered to occupy the same elite tier of reliable sources as The New York Times, or that there's an honest "debate" about whether tear gas is more likely to ignite a huge fire than Molotov cocktails. In sum: Keep it out.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 21:30, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Bolding the last words was unnecessary. I never claimed that the response was in the text per se in the first place. I referenced directly NTN24 per WP:RS, but if you can't access the video through the article this is the YouTube link included: ¿Es creíble la versión del New York Times sobre la quema de la ayuda humanitaria?. As I have mentioned before, NTN24 was the first outlet to report the burning of the aid, regardless of the motives stated, which is why said important weight has been given to it. After all the details provided in the original Grayzone and the addition of another's claim that the NYT vindicated Blumenthal's article, per WP:NPOV it's advisable that at the very least it is shown that the current version has still been questioned. I changed the wording in an effort to improve neutrality. If you believe that NTN24 does not meet the reliability requirements per the Wikipedia policy, I think the best venue is that you request for a comment at the reliable sources noticeboard.--Jamez42 (talk) 17:56, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
 * There might be a NPOV justification if the subject of this article were the burning of the aid truck. However, the subject of this article is Max Blumenthal. If there is no direct connection to him, it doesn't belong here.GPRamirez5 (talk) 01:06, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
 * The edit is a counter view that the NYT vindicated Blumenthal's article, so WP:NPOV still applies. Seeing the insistence to revert even when changes have been suggested remind me of WP:IDONTLIKEIT, and seeing both the edit history and the talk page of the article, a violation of WP:OWN. --Jamez42 (talk) 13:14, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Could you please offer an answer too? WP:BLP explains, bolding in its main page, that information about living persons (original bold), while the information added is regarding a Blumenthal's report, not to say that the information is not poorly sourced, neither does it have libelous material. Quoting that BLP applies here is, in a way, admitting that the information is related to the article. Again, WP:IDONTLIKEIT is not a valid reason for not including the content. --Jamez42 (talk) 08:42, 20 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Jamez42, I have not explicitly alleged that your edits to this article violate BLP; I have only expressed the view that your reverts are rather trigger-happy for someone who is editing a BLP that is also subject to AE sanctions. The WP:ONUS to gain consensus for disputed content would remain even in the case of an article where such restrictions were irrelevant, but one might expect that you would be on your best behavior here. I genuinely do not see how you could consider the comments above by GPRamirez5 and myself to be ambiguous, in need of further clarification, or consistent with your latest revert, citing this discussion. Until there is consensus on the talk page that a rebuttal to the The New York Times is necessary to achieve NPOV, I would strongly advise you not to restore such a rebuttal for a fifth time (or a third time in the case of the specific NTN24 source that you are currently citing). While WP:IDONTLIKEIT is not a valid reason to exclude content from any article, including a BLP, without a source connecting your proposed addition to Max Blumenthal it is difficult to see why you are so insistent on restoring it; WP:ILIKEIT is not a valid rationale for inclusion.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 06:26, 21 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I feel there's effectively a deadlock currently. I think that the best option at the moment is asking for a dispute resolution. What do you think? --Jamez42 (talk) 10:52, 21 April 2019 (UTC)
 * From what I've seen, all of your edits in the articles have either been to keep a preferred version or to just disagree with a point of view, without helping to improve the page, effectively stonewalling. This is the case even with the latest addition, which has had three different versions already. Once again I ask you to please participate in the dispute resolution discussion, since I have started it to prevent edit warring. --Jamez42 (talk) 16:26, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I see that the discussion has already been closed precisely because no answer was given in 72 hours, even with proper notice. If an argument isn't provided in the following 24 hours, I'll restore to the latest proposed addition. Discussion should not stall proposed changes and improvements, specially when there's no sign of willingness to continue such discussion. Different versions have been proposed per the guidelines and policies cited, and further comments have also been received respective counter-arguments. Therefore, I ask for an explanation for keeping the status quo from the latest suggestion or to start again another dispute resolution discussion. --Jamez42 (talk) 17:54, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

"From what I've seen, all of your edits in the articles have either been to keep a preferred version or to just disagree with a point of view, without helping to improve the page, effectively stonewalling." You've got it exactly backwards User:Jamez42. The WP:ONUS is not on us, it is on you to convince and build consensus. You have failed to do that. I expect you will continue to fail because your entire claim of relevancy is so weak it can't be justified. Your grasping use of sourcing and leaps of logic cannot help. If you cite a source that says Jewish men are circumcised and attempt to link that to Max Blumenthal because, after all, he is Jewish and therefore likely circumcised, that is not a worthy addition to the article no matter how many different ways you write it. GPRamirez5 (talk) 21:15, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, I'm already familiarized with WP:ONUS, and my addition is verifiable information from a reliable source. Having already cited guidelines and policies, saying that my "claim of relevancy it's so weak it can't be justified", and that my "grasping use of sourcing and leaps of logic cannot help" it's just near another personal attack, so I'll ask once more to stop the insults. Do you disagree that NTN24 is a reliable source? Please argue why. I am committing logical fallacies or contradictions? Please point them out, but don't accuse me baselessly; making a circumcision is a strawman fallacy and does not refute my points. Why didn't you participate in the dispute resolution discussion, which I opened three days ago and I notified you about, since you want consensus to be built? It takes two to tango.


 * I'll repeat: the content is a opposite view that the NYT vindicated Blumenthal's article. Quoting Greenwald and saying that The New York Times vindicates Blumenthal's report is arguing that they are related, and thus that it is relevant. I'll make a recap of all the current information in the section:


 * Full description of the Grayzone's article, including the dismissal's of the opposition's theory and citing of Bloomberg News footage
 * Anecdote about similar circumstances in the West Bank
 * Full description of the The New York Times' article,
 * Greenwald's quote assuring that the new vindicated the original report


 * Having the whole two paragrahs and having established that there's relevancy between the articles, the section is unbalanced while there isn't mention that the version is still disputed, and even more when the first media outlet to report the event published a special on the article. Can you think on a proposal or an alternative rather than keeping a prefer version per WP:OWN? If the content can't be included, at the very least I can propose that all the unnecesary details are trimmed. --Jamez42 (talk) 23:51, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * And I'll repeat: WP:ONUS.GPRamirez5 (talk) 03:06, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * If you read my response, you would know that I'm not claiming that "verifiability guarantee inclusion" and that this time I did not insist on adding sources. I strongly advise you to discuss the questions that I made. --Jamez42 (talk) 13:11, 25 April 2019 (UTC)

I've been a bit busy lately and felt no urgent need to respond, but that was a fine copyedit. I'd recommend an RfC if you want to establish consensus for including any additional disputed content, as DRN is a broken system and the three of us don't appear likely to change our minds anytime soon. Regards,TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 08:59, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

RfC: Venezuela

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Should any of the two highlighted texts be added to the Venezuela section? --Jamez42 (talk) 21:05, 12 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Option 1:
 * On 24 February 2019, Blumenthal wrote an article for the Grayzone website about clashes on 23 February on the Colombia–Venezuela border during the 2019 Venezuelan presidential crisis and the shipping of humanitarian aid to Venezuela. In the article, Blumenthal dismissed the assertion that tear gas employed by Venezuelan security forces loyal to Nicolás Maduro had set humanitarian aid trucks attempting to enter Venezuela from Colombia on fire, citing footage from Bloomberg News that showed opposition protesters on the Francisca de Paula Santander bridge in the border preparing Molotov cocktails, "which could easily set a truck cabin or its cargo alight", citing similar situations during his reporting on the West Bank. On 10 March, The New York Times wrote that their reconstruction using both public information and previously unpublished video evidence contradicted the version that the use of tear gas by Maduro's forces had caused the trucks to burn and "suggest[ed] that a Molotov cocktail thrown by an antigovernment protester was the most likely trigger for the blaze". However, Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo rejected the claims by The New York Times and insisted that Nicolás Maduro was responsible. "
 * Option 2:
 * On 24 February 2019, Blumenthal wrote an article for the Grayzone website about clashes on 23 February on the Colombia–Venezuela border during the 2019 Venezuelan presidential crisis and the shipping of humanitarian aid to Venezuela. In the article, Blumenthal dismissed the assertion that tear gas employed by Venezuelan security forces loyal to Nicolás Maduro had set humanitarian aid trucks attempting to enter Venezuela from Colombia on fire, citing footage from Bloomberg News that showed opposition protesters on the Francisca de Paula Santander bridge in the border preparing Molotov cocktails, "which could easily set a truck cabin or its cargo alight", citing similar situations during his reporting on the West Bank. On 10 March, The New York Times wrote that their reconstruction using both public information and previously unpublished video evidence contradicted the version that the use of tear gas by Maduro's forces had caused the trucks to burn and "suggest[ed] that a Molotov cocktail thrown by an antigovernment protester was the most likely trigger for the blaze". NTN24 published a rebuttal to the New York Times article. "

--Jamez42 (talk) 21:05, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Background
The article's current section on Venezuela currently deals with Blumenthal's article regarding the burning of humanitarian aid trucks in February and adds that an article of The New York Times reaches a similar conclusion. At least two texts about opposite points of view have been proposed as changes to the article. There's currently no consensus about how to proceed. The discussions above can be read for references, specifically the Trujillo section. --Jamez42 (talk) 14:45, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

Survey

 * Oppose both option 1 and option 2. I am happy with the way the event is currently described. If there are RS's that analyse Blumenthal's position then they could possibly be added though I don't think the section on this one event should be expanded too much. The two sources listed in the RFC do not mention Blumenthal so I don't support including their analysis in Blumenthal's bio. They would be more relevant to a page discussing the situation in Venezuela. The NYTimes piece used in the current article does not mention Blumenthal but some description of it is necessary to make sense of Greenwald's comment. Any analysis added to the article about the event at the border should be attributed as it will be someone's opinion. This is what has been done with Blumenthal's, the NYT's and Greenwald's opinions. Burrobert (talk) 16:36, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Exclude along with the rest of the section. This is blatant WP:COATRACK material that has nothing to do with Blumenthal. Battles over Venezuela-related content should be confined to Venezuela-related articles. Notice that neither source mentions him at all; that should be a red flag to all of you bickering over this. R2 (bleep) 20:50, 11 July 2019 (UTC)


 * So far and to be honest, I think this is the best option available. --Jamez42 (talk) 21:24, 11 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Oppose including any of the content proposed by Jamez42 above. Ahrtoodeetoo is basically correct that this is WP:COATRACK material intended to push a POV related to the situation in Venezuela, with neither of the sources cited by Jamez42 even mentioning Blumenthal. I'd go further and say that neither of Jamez42's sources appear to be reliable or to "rebut" the gold-standard RS The New York Times in any meaningful way (one is just the Colombian foreign minister denying that his government edited footage of the incident—a well-sourced allegation that was already removed in order to placate Jamez42—and insisting that Maduro was still morally responsible for it even if opposition forces actually started the fire—which is not falsifiable). However, Ahrtoodeetoo is wrong to suggest that the long-standing text in the article is equally problematic; only one side in this dispute is relying on dubious sources or attempting to push a political agenda unrelated to the ostensible subject of the article, as the article history should make clear. The "Venezuela" section was created by SandyGeorgia before The New York Times revealed to the general public that anti-Maduro protesters burned the aid trucks with Molotov cocktails, when Blumenthal's skepticism of Maduro's responsibility seemed wacky and weird to the majority of laymen and credentialed specialists alike, and was sourced entirely to Blumenthal's own report and the Venezuelan opposition newspaper La Patilla (an outlet with a dubious record of accuracy and neutrality). Like Jamez42's sources, the La Patilla source said absolutely nothing whatsoever about Blumenthal, so the text initially was pure WP:OR by SandyGeorgia intended to impugn Blumenthal's personal character for "wrongthink," with SandyGeorgia implying that Blumenthal had some sort of untoward relationship with Telesur because it happened to reprint his analysis and attempting to tie Blumenthal to a contrived "plagiarism scandal" at Telesur that he had nothing to do with. SandyGeorgia's version was an absurd abuse of Wikipedia's content policies, all but explicitly calling Blumenthal a "useful idiot for Maduro" in wikivoice, but these BLP vios stuck for a long time—until the truth came out, revealing that Blumenthal was 100% correct and his critics (in this case, Wikipedia editors) were 100% wrong. As a result, the section was updated to reflect the current consensus in RS, including one sentence of attributed commentary from an Intercept article quite explicitly crediting Blumenthal, prompting some of the same editors (now including Jamez42, it seems) that most vehemently advocated for the existence of a "Venezuela" section in this article when its only purpose was to smear Blumenthal to turn around and say that the topic is actually UNDUE... And yet, these same editors are still simultaneously the only ones actually attempting to force content and sources with no connection to the BLP subject into this article, trying to have their cake and eat it, too. It's completely unprincipled conduct, justified only by Jamez42's insistence that facts and RS need to be "balanced" with opinion and unreliable sources to achieve WP:NPOV (which is an erroneous understanding of what the policy requires). There should be no false equivalence made between the long-standing version and the addition suggested by Jamez42 above; if Jamez42 loses this RfC, then he should not be permitted to remove the entire section as a consolation prize.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 05:31, 12 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Comment I'm dismayed of response, specially since you were the one that recommended starting a RfC. I also started a dispute resolution discussion when I was seeking to find a consensus, and neither  or you seemed interested in participating, so I can assure you that my intention isn't "winning", and neither is that the point of RfCs to start with, not to mention this one. My changes only had the intention of showing the report has been contested, show both points of view per WP:NPOV, but I think this has been discussed ad nauseam above, and I prefer third parties to form a position based on the previous section, as well as receiving feedback from them. If you want to argue further that's alright, but saying that my intention is to "advance an agenda", among other accusations, is not only assuming bad faith, but also personal attacks, which I have already asked you in the past to please stop. Let's not make this dispute harder to solve. --Jamez42 (talk) 21:36, 12 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Exclude along with the rest of the section, as proposed by R2. I moved Blumenthal being added to the Wiesenthal Ctr 2013 list to this section, as it does not seem to fit anywhere else. But I think such lists are mostly useless and question it being included. Everything published about Blumenthal does not have to be included. I think this list of so-called Controversies is mostly much ado about nothing and agree with excluding it altogether. It seems very odd to characterize disagreements with a reporter as constituting a controversy. There is too little about this article about the influence of the Independence Party on Sarah Palin's political career to make any sense of the entry here, and her reportedly wanting to divert attention from the story means little. I agree that this is not the place to argue about his reporting on the Venezuela material. It is overblowing it to say it is a controversy, and it belongs with related material in the Venezuela article, per WP:COATRACK.Parkwells (talk) 01:29, 16 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Shorten As a disinterested observer, neutrality does not require this amount of detail; in fact, it works against it because you end up recycling opposing views. Maybe that's the issue.


 * "A February 2019 article by Blumenthal concerning clashes on the Colombia–Venezuela border challenged assertions tear gas used by Venezuelan security forces set fire to trucks attempting to enter Venezuela with humanitarian aid. The article suggested the cause was Molotov cocktails thrown by opposition protesters, a claim supported by the New York Times but rejected by Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo."

Robinvp11 (talk) 11:02, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

Extended discussion
Sometimes we get so involved in our internecine battles that we forget to see the forest through the trees. R2 (bleep) 21:26, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

I just read the RfC, and I have no idea what it is asking. Be added where? I'd suggest trying again with a version of the RfC that is intelligible to someone who has no prior familiarity with the article or the dispute.Adoring nanny (talk) 03:18, 12 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi! I'm sorry, I tried rewriting the RfC to be clearer. Please let me know if I should improve anything, I don't have much experience with RfCs. --Jamez42 (talk) 21:12, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Comment I intended to ask in the RfC other users if there was any proposed changes besides the ones in the options, like, so any other recommendations are welcome. --Jamez42 (talk) 20:24, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


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The "Venezuela" section: followup to the RfC close
asked me to comment here since I closed an RfC about the "Venezuela" section.

Here is the sequence of edits:


 * 1) 18:50, 27 October 2019 (UTC): Jamez42 removed the "Venezuela" section, writing, "Removing section per RfC".
 * 2) 01:54, 28 October 2019 (UTC): Burrobert reverted, writing, "My understanding of the RFC is that it refers to the highlighted text at the bottom of the paragraph, not to the whole paragraph itself."
 * 3) 19:07, 28 October 2019 (UTC): Jamez42 replaced the section, writing, "You're right. A shorter version was proposed; including."
 * 4) 02:54, 7 November 2019 (UTC): Burrobert reverted, writing, "The RfC didn't agree to summarising the text. It was a suggestion by one of the participants. Returning the text that was approved by the RfC."
 * 5) 22:52, 7 November 2019 (UTC): Jamez42 reverted, writing, "Is that the only reason why you're reverting? You are the only editor oppossing change along with TheTimesAreAChanging. Two other editors showed support of removing the entire section".

The RfC was about only the bolded text that was proposed to be added after the two paragraphs in the "Venezuela" section that another editor has removed and replaced here. The RfC's conclusion was to reject each proposed addition. The RfC close did not make a judgment on the existence of the "Venezuela" section or the then-wording of the "Venezuela" section since editors were not asked those questions. I recommend creating a new RfC to ask the community two questions:


 * 1) Should the "Venezuela" section be kept or deleted?
 * 2) If the consensus is to keep the "Venezuela" section, which version of the text should be used: this one or this one or a different version?

My reading of the RfC consensus is that there was a clear consensus against adding the bolded text because it was a coatrack. One of the additions the RfC rejected was: "However, Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo rejected the claims by The New York Times and insisted that Nicolás Maduro was responsible."

Jamez42's edit here condenses the section. The summary has this sentence: "The article suggested the cause was Molotov cocktails thrown by opposition protesters, a claim supported by The New York Times but rejected by Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo." The consensus in the RfC was to exclude the mention of Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo, so I consider the part of the sentence about the claim being "rejected by Colombian foreign minister Carlos Holmes Trujillo" to be a violation of the RfC consensus. I recommend removing this part of the sentence unless and until there is a consensus to include this material. I also recommend restoring the status quo version of the article to this 02:54, 7 November 2019 (UTC) edit by Burrorobert unless and until there is a consensus to change it. Cunard (talk) 08:43, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for having a look . I think your analysis is accurate. I'll give other editors a chance to comment before making your suggested edits to the disputed text. Burrobert (talk) 11:51, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you . I have restored the section per your advice. I would like to start another RfC to clarify this point, but I would be grateful if somebody does it before. Best regards. --Jamez42 (talk) 18:16, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you both. Thank you,, for restoring the section per my suggestion. I agree that another RfC would be very useful to determine the community consensus on these questions. Cunard (talk) 00:45, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Also a Greyzone current writer
As referenced here: https://thegrayzone.com/author/max-blumenthal/. Can't edit as don't have 500 edits or something Apeholder (talk) 01:00, 3 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes the article is locked. The Grayzone is mentioned in the body of the article. I have added a sentence about it to the leading paragraph as well. Burrobert (talk) 04:04, 3 October 2019 (UTC)

Frequent contributor to Mint Press News
Mr. Blumenthal is a frequent contributor to Mint Press News. See: https://www.mintpressnews.com/author/max-blumenthal/ Please add this information to the appropriate paragraph under "Career".

RfC: Max Blumenthal Venezuela section

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In the Max Blumenthal article, this text has been proposed to replace the Venezuela section:

What should be done?


 * A. Keep the section 
 * B. Include the proposed text
 * C. Remove the whole section --Jamez42 (talk) 01:43, 28 November 2019 (UTC)

Survey

 * Option A. I think the text is fine as is. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Burrobert (talk • contribs)


 * Option A.  I see no valid reason to chop down the Venezuela section as proposed. BTW, you should put the existing language in this RfC. Coretheapple (talk) 14:44, 10 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Option A. Keep the section.  It accurately explains the reporting and there is no reason to trim it down. --David Tornheim (talk) 10:43, 15 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Option A. As per sources. Bacondrum (talk) 23:53, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Option A. The original section has a more detailed account. For clarity, it would also help to identify who are making the assertions about the Venezuelan security forces causing the fire. Darwin Naz (talk) 23:00, 27 December 2019 (UTC)

Discussion

 * Comment - Please amend this proposal to include specific sources. Thanks. Grayfell (talk) 03:53, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback. I have included the references to the proposed text. --Jamez42 (talk) 16:04, 28 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Comment @Jamez42 - This is my first contribution to a discussion so forgive me if my formatting is incorrect. I would suggest editing the first sentence for syntactic clarity - "...challenged assertions that tear gas...". I would also advocate for option B, because your suggested addition, in my opinion, succinctly expresses two opposing narratives without bias towards either one. In light of the above consternation, I appreciate your suggested edit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by LittleChongsto (talk • contribs) 23:01, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
 * No worries, format seems good to me :) Thanks for the proposal! --Jamez42 (talk) 01:08, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
 * has made the statement of this RfC too large for to handle, and so it is  at Requests for comment/Biographies. The RfC needs a brief and neutral statement to show correctly; it will also not be publicised through WP:FRS until a shorter statement is provided. -- Red rose64 &#x1f339; (talk) 21:55, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Reverted. Thanks for the notice! --Jamez42 (talk) 23:06, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the fix, . -- Red rose64 &#x1f339; (talk) 00:21, 11 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Comment I think an explanation would be useful as to why deleting almost the whole section (option B) or removing the section entirely (option C) would be warranted. Is there something wrong with the rest of the section? It seems fairly unobjectionable to me, but I may be missing some context. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 04:15, 15 December 2019 (UTC)
 * See the previous RfC for details. --Jamez42 (talk) 16:08, 15 December 2019 (UTC)


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Neutrality
The neutrality tag has been in place since July 2019. What issues are unresolved? --David Tornheim (talk) 21:32, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Looking at the history it was placed by Jamez42 with comment "Placing neutrality tag, given the current dispute in the talk page. Will start a RfC shortly". There has been a completed RfC on Venezuela since then so perhaps the issue has been resolved. The Venezuela section seems fine to me but perhaps Jamez42 should have a look and give an opinion. Burrobert (talk) 05:11, 19 December 2019 (UTC)

Pinging Jamez42 as they just made a reference to the neutrality tag in an edit summary. Can you please explain what the current issues on the page are, in your view? — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 15:29, 19 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the ping. As I commented in my edit summary, I fell that the Venezuela section currently has unnecessary and excessive details, and it should be mentioned that the first added version was quite different from the current one. There's still an ongoing discussion on wherever to trim the section or not, but there are some improvements that I've thought about doing once it ends.


 * However, this seems to be a problem in the rest of the sections regarding Syria, Russia and Saudi Arabia, as examples, where they talk more about political positions rather than Blumenthal's actual career or articles. Again, I think these improvements could be done once the RfC ends. --Jamez42 (talk) 03:07, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Why do improvements to Syria, Russia, and Saudi Arabia need to wait until the Venezuela RfC ends? I've noticed some issues with the Russia section in particular as well, which is largely populated by descriptions of attacks on him (e.g., referring to him as a "useful idiot" for Putin, comparing him to InfoWars, etc.). Per WP:BLPBALANCE we should probably avoid giving disproportionate space and undue weight to these smears. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 17:30, 20 December 2019 (UTC)

Unexplained removal of content from the lead
Please explain this revert of my revert. I reverted your edit because you removed content from the lead and moved it to the body of the article, apparently not noticing that the material is already in the body of the article, only one paragraph above where you copied it to. The article now reads:
 * Blumenthal's articles and video documentaries have been published in The New York Times, Los Angeles Times, The Daily Beast, The Nation, The Guardian, The Huffington Post, Independent Film Channel, Salon, The Real News, Al Jazeera English,[4] Sputnik,[14] and the Columbia Journalism Review.[15] [paragraph break] Blumenthal has written for The New York Times, the Los Angeles Times, The Nation, The Huffington Post, the Independent Film Channel, Salon.com, Al Jazeera English and other publications.[16]

This is hopelessly redundant and can't possibly be construed as an improvement to the article, so I reverted it. In the same edit, you also removed the term "award-winning" from the lead without explaining it. I don't have strong opinions about whether this should be there, but since you didn't give any reason and it's obviously true, I reverted the whole edit.

In your revert, you say: WP:UNDUE and WP:LABEL. The article is already tagged with NPOV, it should be tried to be improved. I don't see how either of the cited policies apply.
 * 1) Please explain why you think summarizing the venues in which Blumenthal has been published is undue in the lead but not undue in the body. Similar material appears in the leads of other articles about journalists, e.g., Matthew Yglesias, Ezra Klein, and leads are supposed to summarize the article, which is what the content you removed does.
 * 2) As for "award-winning", I'm not sure how this is a "contentious label", since it's actually a fact, but again, I don't have a strong opinion about including it or not.

I'd also like to say that editing would be more productive if you followed WP:BRD and did not restore your own bold edits after they have been removed—especially when doing so would objectively make the article worse by introducing repetition (as I stated in my edit summary, which you seem not to have read). If you believe a policy is being violated you should explain it clearly on talk rather than just linking the policy page in your edit summary. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 15:27, 19 December 2019 (UTC)


 * The term "award-winning" is loaded to include in the lead. Even Stephen King, arguably the most prolific writer in the last years, does not have any similar description, and lets the article content to describe his merits, as well as other details in the content.


 * As of the awards, I did not remove them, but moved them. They were added directly to the lead, and not having said text in the section defeats the whole purpose of a lead to summarize the article. --Jamez42 (talk) 03:17, 20 December 2019 (UTC)


 * OK, it seems like maybe you don't understand what you did. Please look at the diff of yours that I linked again. You did not remove awards from the lead. You removed the summary of venues in which Blumenthal's work has been published, and his position as a fellow at the Nation Institute. You moved this information to the body of the article, directly below where near-identical material was already found, which had the effect of (a) removing the information from the lead, and (b) repeating near-identical information in the body of the article.
 * Since this seems to have been a mistake, I'll restore the information to the lead. Please read carefully next time before jumping the gun. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 17:17, 20 December 2019 (UTC)


 * I misspoke, you could also have interpreted that instead of saying "I didn't understand what I did". I made a different edit to solve the issue. --Jamez42 (talk) 18:07, 20 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Sorry for failing to read your mind. Why did you remove the NYT, the Guardian, and other highly-regarded sources that Blumenthal has written for, leaving only the more marginal sources? I don't see the value of this change and think they should be re-added. The lead is short and doesn't need to be trimmed. Also, the wording "was formerly" is also not really verifiable, unless you have a source that says he's terminated his relationship with those sources? The original wording, "has written for" is more accurate. Can you explain why you changed it? — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 18:52, 20 December 2019 (UTC)


 * I have no idea of what you're talking about. Compare these https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Max_Blumenthal&oldid=931707088 two versions and you'll see that the main change was moving statements, while the wording change was just to include "Blumenthal has written for media outlets and publications". I ask you to stop snarky remarks. --Jamez42 (talk) 21:38, 20 December 2019 (UTC)

You're right that that the "was formerly" wording wasn't yours, sorry. Why did you feel the need to eliminate the mentions of the specific publications he's written for? "Blumenthal has written for several outlets and publications" is a vague statement that says essentially nothing (it's established in the previous paragraph), and is not an improvement over the previous text, which gave specific examples. The lead did not need trimming so it's unclear what problem you were attempting to solve. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 21:52, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
 * I agree with the arguments of about and his/recent edits restoring content.   please do not keep deleting this material from the WP:LEDE.  --David Tornheim (talk) 22:23, 20 December 2019 (UTC)


 * What I can say is that the lead is the summary of the article, and repeating all of the publications mentioned in the content defeats its purpose; only Sputnik and the Columbia Journalism Review are left out. This is particularly concerning considering the current POV tag. If I may, maybe we can include the three or four most important publications instead of all of them, as a possible alternative. --Jamez42 (talk) 22:36, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
 * This is particularly concerning considering the current POV tag. You are the one who put the tag there.  I don't see why multiple editors disagreeing with what *you* want in the lede are somehow "particularly concerning", because you had previously put the POV tag on the article, and are still not satisfied when the RfC's are showing that editors don't agree with you. Strange. --David Tornheim (talk) 07:26, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Doing a quick read across the talk page shows that I'm clearly not the first editor to express POV concerns. If these positions are based policies or guidelines, I don't see which the problem is. It should be mentioned that the RfC is only about the Venezuela section, and a discussion about other sections has not started. I wouldn't mind pinging said editors to know about their arguments, but I don't think it'd be correct per WP:CANVASS. I have made the edit per the proposal, including The New York Times, The Nation, The Guardian and Al Jazeera English as publications examples. --Jamez42 (talk) 08:56, 21 December 2019 (UTC)

Inaccurate smear in the Syria section
Under the Syria section of this article it states that Blumenthal "started promoting views supportive of Bashar al Assad". Wikipedia does not link to a single article where Max has said supportive things of the Assad government. (and by the way he has criticized the Syrian government for being an authoritarian police state and using Vietnam era weapons to violently put down an insurgency). The difference though between him and many of the western intervention cheerleaders it that he has also criticized the sectarianism of the rebels (who have worked with AQ and ISIS, at different points) and he has criticized the role of the US and other powerful forces in trying to expand and continue the war- reproducing the bloodshed rather than helping to push for peace and compromise. These criticisms have been conflated with "support for Assad" which is so clearly a smear meant to silence him and scare off other people from his work. Wikipedia can do better than this.

Also the page states "Blumenthal had allegedly mocked Syrians for preparing plastic bags to protect against alleged Syrian government chemical weapons attacks." IF you go back and look at the tweet and the context he was mocking international coverage of events in Syria, when it was so clear that media coverage was not critically investigating the chemical weapons attacks and was instead echoing claims made by jihadist and islamist organizations to provoke US military intervention. This whole Syria section is so biased and clearly written by people who support intervention and want to smear this author.

It also states " In 2019, he visited Damascus to take part in a trade union convention. He received criticism from some exiled Syrians for allegedly promoting views that favour Assad during his visit." But here it says nothing about what exactly he was talking about that upset supporters of the rebels. He was writing and tweeting about the role of the sanctions in carrying out collective punishment, blocking fuel, finances, trade, similar to the hybrid wars being carried out on Venezuela and Iran. These page is only referencing the smears of those who criticize him on Syria, but dosnt actually reflect any of the content of his writings on Syria. It also falsely labels him as an Assadist and makes it sound as if his critics have "no ball in the game", so to say. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 47.147.197.20 (talk) 22:31, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Some or much of what you say may be true. However, Wikipedia relies on what is written in WP:SECONDARY reliable sources (WP:RS).  The tweets and article by Blumenthal are not secondary but WP:PRIMARY.  And some of the things you stated that are objectionable appear to have been written in the RS.  If you can provide other WP:RS that disagrees, that can be added.  I'm going to parse some of your statement based on this.  --David Tornheim (talk) 07:40, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Under the Syria section of this article it states that Blumenthal "started promoting views supportive of Bashar al Assad". Wikipedia does not link to a single article where Max has said supportive things of the Assad government.
 * This article in the New York Times NY Review of Books calls Blumenthal "an Assad apologist" and says, "Another prominent pro-Assad figure is Max Blumenthal." So the statement is sourced to WP:SECONDARY WP:RS.  Is there WP:RS that challenges this assertion? Is there any WP:RS that supports any of the other claims made in the first paragraph?  Perhaps, non-American media?  --David Tornheim (talk) 07:50, 21 December 2019 (UTC)  [revised 08:01, 21 December 2019 (UTC) per next comment.]
 * It's actually from the NY Review of Books, and it reads like an opinion piece (e.g., describing things as "maddening", using "unfortunately" in reference to the author's opinion, etc). It should at least be attributed, probably. — cmonghost 👻 (talk) 07:53, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * You are correct. I will fix.  I agree it should be attributed, ideally to the author of the piece.  Can you do it?--David Tornheim (talk) 07:56, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Why is an opinion piece, that never actually factually validates its claim that Blumenthal is an Assadist, allowed to remain here? This is definitely a smear and does not hold up to Wikipedia standards for defining the totality of how someone feels about a contemporary event.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 47.147.197.20 (talk) 03:31, 24 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Also the page states "Blumenthal had allegedly mocked Syrians for preparing plastic bags to protect against alleged Syrian government chemical weapons attacks. This was sourced to this article in The Jerusalem Post, a periodical that I am not familiar.  Are you suggesting it is unreliable?  That articles lede says "Blumenthal has mocked Syrians in the past for preparing plastic bags to protect against Syrian regime chemical weapons attacks."  Is there WP:RS that says this article is in error or gives a different take on the tweets in question?  --David Tornheim (talk) 08:14, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Jerusalem post is definitely unreliable source for explaining Blumenthal. He is a top critic of Israeli foreign policy and this newspaper is owned by people directly connected with the Israeli government and takes a very pro-interventionist line for that country. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 47.147.197.20 (talk) 03:34, 24 December 2019 (UTC)


 * IF you go back and look at the tweet and the context he was mocking international coverage of events in Syria,...
 * Could indeed be true. But, I believe this would be original research, WP:PRIMARY and/or WP:SELFPUB.  Please read WP:PRIMARY and WP:OR and let me know if you think there is a reason that the original tweet(s) could be added.  Can you provide a link to any tweet you think would be worthy of inclusion and the justification for that inclusion?  --David Tornheim (talk) 08:14, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * when it was so clear that media coverage was not critically investigating the chemical weapons attacks and was instead echoing claims made by jihadist and islamist organizations to provoke US military intervention. This whole Syria section is so biased and clearly written by people who support intervention and want to smear this author.
 * This may be true, but please see WP:NOTTRUTH. I have noted my concerns about U.S. media bias since I first started editing and the fact that this same media is frequently used as WP:RS: See User:David_Tornheim.  Also, please see Media_bias_in_the_United_States, Media_bias_in_the_United_States, and Media_bias_in_the_United_States.
 * One way to address such bias is to find equal or more reliable sources (e.g. academic journals, experts, etc.) that do not have such a bias or that provide a different viewpoint. Foreign press is acceptable.  Do you have WP:RS that says any of what you claim above?  That's the best way to address your concern.  --David Tornheim (talk) 09:39, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * [Third paragraph]
 * I haven't reviewed the concerns of the third paragraph. Those would likely be addressed in the same way as mentioned above--using reliable sources that support claims you have made. --David Tornheim (talk) 09:44, 21 December 2019 (UTC)


 * question::

Why is Janine di Giovanni quoted to explain Blumenthal's "support for Assad"? Janine di Giovanni does not accurately depict Max's views and instead engages in a smear. This smear is not supported by any evidence. Wikipedia cannot find a single shred of evidence where Max says he supports Assad. So why is this smear left up? So Wikipedia will quote a smear as long as it is cited? Also, now you have a better segment under "Career" referring to Max's history on Syria. However, he did not just "claim" that the White helmets were connected to islamist extremists and Al Nusra, he actually documented it.

The section on Syria under "Career" should be moved down to the part of the text that is actually on Syria. His career spans a huge amount of topics, and how you have it now it makes it appear as if he has focused on Syria, which is not accurate.

Again the sentence "Blumenthal had allegedly mocked Syrians for preparing plastic bags to protect against alleged Syrian government chemical weapons attacks" should be changed to something like "Pro-interventionist Critics of Blumenthal have alleged he has mocked Syrians for preparing plastic bags to protect against alleged Syrian government chemical weapons attacks, when if taken in context he was poking criticism at the mass media's uncritical reporting on chemical weapons attacks." Are you all watching how numerous experts at the OPCW have now come forward challenging the narrative on chemical weapons in Syria? Max is not alone on this, and he has done it in a careful and professional investigative way. You can watch the videos of Aaron Mate at the Grayzone (Max's outlet) where he interviews numerous experts on Chemical weapons and the OPCW controversy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 47.147.197.20 (talk) 03:20, 24 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Regarding OPCW, I found this report from March 2019. Is this the most recent report?  No comment on the other issues at this time.  I think some of them may have been addressed by another editor.  Major changes to the article have taken place in the last couple of days. --David Tornheim (talk) 03:10, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * You probably mean these:
 * and this video:
 * Is there are other material to look at? --David Tornheim (talk) 03:26, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * I found more material from this section:
 * Talk:Douma_chemical_attack
 * based on 's comment below. ZScarpia:  Do you have any thoughts on the above?  --David Tornheim (talk) 12:37, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * based on 's comment below. ZScarpia:  Do you have any thoughts on the above?  --David Tornheim (talk) 12:37, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Writers such as Janine di Giovanni have referred to others as Assad-friendly or Assad-apologists when, if you examine their writing, they have been very critical of the Assad regime. Being opposed to attempts by outside governments to engineer regime change in places such as Syria doesn't necessarily make people supporters of the regimes there ("spreading democracy" hasn't worked very well in Afghanistan, Libya, Iraq and the Ukraine and those doing the spreading have a record of unseating democratic governments in places like Chile and Iran when it suited them). Neutrality means that nothing can be stated as a fact (rather than a point of view) here if other reliable sources contradict it. If there aren't any contradictory reliable sources, I think it becomes legitimate to quote the subjects themselves in order to show that they have expressed views contradictory to those being represented, though care needs to be taken not to do it in such a way that introduces original research or synthesis.      ←   ZScarpia  13:53, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Blumenthal says much the same as the regime about the White Helmets (their claims have been rejected by admissible sources). In September, with his associates, he had access to government-controlled areas of Syria which Assad's critics do not. He was accompanied by the head of the Syrian Solidarity Movement which six years ago organised the visit to the United States by Mother Agnes, another Assadist (read the sources used in her article). The citations other editors object to do use evidence. Of course, Blumenthal is going deny defending the Syrian government, the reverse would not be a wise action, but all Wikipedia articles are meant to reflect multiple points of view. And Blumenthal has become a controversial figure. Philip Cross (talk) 14:38, 27 December 2019 (UTC)

Sourcing
your reference to this RS/N entry which is nearly a decade old and refers to a disputed Nelson Mandela quote in a 1990 article is insufficient to demonstrate the unreliability of Commentary. Nor is you assertion that the Bruce Bawer article is "biased" sufficient for its deletion. Blumenthal is a controversial figure who gains a strong reaction and inevitably the article is going to reflect that. Positive mentions of him in RS are a small minority.

You have restored a RT (Russia Today) reference, which especially on international politics (as here, even if the event was in Moscow), is not considered reliable by the editing community. The event four years ago has plenty of good third party sources. I considered the mention of Michael Flynn, and a British politician, off-topic so I removed it. Philip Cross (talk) 13:43, 26 December 2019 (UTC)
 * To your concerns:
 * Commentary (magazine) is a neo-con advocacy magazine.
 * Bruce Bawer is conservative figure, who is associated with Neo-conservativism. He and the magazine can hardly be objective in commenting on a writer so openly opposed to hawkish neo-conservativism.
 * Attendance of Michael Flynn and politician Ken Livingstone (and even Jill Stein) show that attendance at the event is not as controversial or unusual as the articles are trying to make it.
 * The quotes on the on the reliability of RT were selective.  It also says:  "There is no consensus on the reliability of RT (formerly Russia Today)."  I think it is safe to say that RT knows who attended their own event.  That hardly seems controversial or "international politics".
 * Let's see what other editors think. --David Tornheim (talk) 19:33, 26 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Since Wikipedia does not discount sources on the basis of their politics or personal preference, but on the basis of not being a reliable source; an argument better than you have provided on Commentary and Bawer is required. On the basis of the attendees in Moscow, I would read their articles as their inclusion does not benefit Blumenthal (allegedly pro-Putin, etc). Michael Flynn (the case is on appeal) has a conviction for accepting funds from a foreign government without authorization (Turkey), illicit contact with officials from a second government (Russia) and making false statements. Philip Cross (talk) 22:16, 26 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Bawer's opinion piece calling Blumenthal an "idiot" in the way you added it was far WP:UNDUE and hardly WP:NPOV. The piece. If you wanted to put it in a criticism section, that may be okay, especially if the author of the piece is identified as being both conservative and a neo-con. But if you want to include someone with such strong opinions from the right, it seems only fair that for balance you include opinions of the many notable figures who support him, such as Medea Benjamin from Code Pink (e.g. this article)? Right?  (For disclosure:  I have donated to Code Pink User:David_Tornheim and am friends with her on Facebook to receive her reporting).  Or Maduro himself:  .  --David Tornheim (talk) 23:32, 26 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Wikipedia does not normally have "Criticism" sections on NPOV grounds and the labeling you suggest is unsourced and POV. Sources do not need to be "balanced" to be used here. Bawer's article also backed up the "pro-Assad" claim which was a little contentious a few days ago. Incidentally, Bawer's article was not the only source to use the "Useful Idiot" tag in the article. Philip Cross (talk) 23:57, 26 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Bruce Bawer is a writer with a reputation for somewhat extreme views. Commentary is a magazine with a Neo-conservative bent and a focus on "Jewish affairs". Given their viewpoint, both are obviously going to have fairly partisan opinions about Blumenthal. While that doesn't rule out using them in the article, it begs the question of why you would want to.
 * Perhaps there's a bit of a double standard in operation here, given that the use of the reporting and commentary of better known writers was objected to in the article on the Douma attack.
 *    ←   ZScarpia  12:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * WP:RSP is clear regarding the result of the discussion of RT's reliability: RT is generally unreliable for topics that are controversial or related to international politics. --Jamez42 (talk) 12:38, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * The quotes on the on the reliability of RT were selective.  It also says:  "There is no consensus on the reliability of RT (formerly Russia Today)."  I think it is safe to say that RT knows who attended their own event.  That hardly seems controversial or "international politics".  (which I had already written above). --David Tornheim (talk) 12:48, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * A gathering of individuals from the West in Moscow clearly counts as "international politics" on which the perennial sources page is quite clear: don't cite RT.


 * On the previous issue, personal preferences rather than Wikipedia policy are taking priority here. Only one objection to citing Commentary on RS/N has been located (by David Tornheim above) which applied to one incident thirty years ago, so policy arguments against citing the magazine are weak. The somewhat unsourced page on Bawer on RationalWiki, inferior to the Wikipedia page, would not be accepted here. Philip Cross (talk) 12:55, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * No. I am not alone in objecting to Bawer's piece in Commentary.  did here.
 * As I have continually explained, RT's ability to factually identify who was at the event is hardly controversial or "international politics". --David Tornheim (talk) 20:54, 27 December 2019 (UTC)

Pulse
You have used Pulse for quite a few refs e.g.. Please explain why what appears to be a blog and WP:SPS (see https://pulsemedia.org/about/) is WP:RS for this article. --David Tornheim (talk) 22:29, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Pulse is co-edited by Dr Idrees Ahmad of the University of Stirling. I believe it can be considered RS. Philip Cross (talk) 09:14, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

New Politics
I'd also see your justification of using this opinion piece in New Politics that has the title "troll" is WP:RS. Putting an ad hominem in the title hardly seems like objective reporting. --David Tornheim (talk) 22:29, 27 December 2019 (UTC)


 * The WP article you cite says New Politics is an "independent socialist journal" associated with a "'Neither Washington Nor Moscow!' Third Camp, democratic Marxist perspective." Not exactly a conservative/neo-conservative publication then. Unless you consider a list of contributors including Noam Chomsky, Paul Buhle, Cornel West and Howard Zinn to be so. Philip Cross (talk) 09:25, 28 December 2019 (UTC)


 * The About and Why We Publish pages identify it as an independent socialist forum for dialogue and debate on the left. The site lists no editorial policies. It's a forum for opinions, not a source for facts. Humanengr (talk) 07:45, 13 August 2020 (UTC)


 * It has an editorial board and co-editors demonstrating oversight of the articles it publishes. Philip Cross (talk) 08:50, 13 August 2020 (UTC)


 * ‘Oversight' isn’t fact-checking. And here, the article says “[Blumenthal] has since gone on to help produce features for RT” which links (now retrievable via archive.is) to this tweet by Anya Parampil which says "Excited to air a project I’ve dumped all my energy into over last few weeks— along with @MaxBlumenthal. Produced by @davidsheen.” That does not say Blumenthal "helped produce" the show much less the plural "helped produce features". The About page for that film does not mention Blumenthal. No, they don’t fact-check. Humanengr (talk) 00:57, 14 August 2020 (UTC)


 * All of this has nothing to do with what it cited in the article. But for the record, "helped produce" does not mean "Produced by", but it can mean Blumenthal was involved in the program, which Ms Parampil confirms. Philip Cross (talk) 06:27, 14 August 2020 (UTC)


 * I questioned the propriety of using New Politics as a fact source. You responded with 'oversight'. I pointed to failure to fact-check. Your All of this has nothing to do with what it cited in the article does not counter the failure of New Politics to fact-check. Hence not RS. (It is worthwhile noting, however, that this particular failure goes directly to Charles Davis's reporting on Blumenthal.)
 * The failure to fact-check goes directly to the questionable nature of this source: Questionable sources are those with a poor reputation for checking the facts or with no editorial oversight (per WP:QUESTIONABLE) or, as WP:APPLYRS says, What matters is the fact-checking process. I repeat, not RS.
 * Re 'produce', we are talking about a 'film' (RT's term, or what Charles Davis calls a 'feature'). The word 'produce' has a very specific meaning: per Wiktionary: To sponsor and present (a motion picture, etc) to an audience or to the public.
 * Also, you have no response to the misrepresentation of singular as plural He has since gone on to help produce features for RT.
 * Beyond that, it is worth noting that, per Davis, he was named by Blumenthal as a “shadow author” (a claim Davis denies) in a threat of litigation Blumenthal brought against SPLC. That Davis chose to pen this article lacks even the appearance of objectivity. Humanengr (talk) 07:28, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * This article cites multiple sources where Blumenthal's credibility and the veracity of his claims have been questioned. As Wikipedia does not allow subjects any influence over the content of the articles, his opinion of Charles Davis is irrelevant. The SPLC article Blumenthal objected to was not by Charles Davis, but by Alexander Reid Ross. The article by Ross which is cited was published by Haaretz, a source which has the highest rating for reliability on Wikipedia here. Philip Cross (talk) 07:58, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Those points are all irrelevant. What is relevant is that Davis — after being named in a legal threat by Blumenthal (whether Blumenthal is correct or not in his assertion re Davis's 'shadow authorship') — chose to pen an article about Blumenthal. You have no response to any of my (now numbered) points. Humanengr (talk) 08:24, 14 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Mirrors of the deleted SPLC article are not cited in this article, and there would, in the circumstances, be valid to oppose its inclusion. Since when has an article by someone responding to an accusation in a reliable, non-deprecated source been inadmissible? Davis directly quotes Blumenthal's claim concerning himself in the New Politics article: "This wasn’t by one writer. This was by a cabal of people who have been trying to suppress dissent". Davis writes of the claim passed to him from the SPLC's general counsel: "It was with some surprise, then, that I received a call on March 13 from the SPLC’s bemused general counsel, Jim Knoepp, regarding a peculiar legal threat Blumenthal had sent to the civil rights organization. That threat named me as a “shadow author” of an article I did not write by a man I did not know on topics we had never discussed". If only Blumenthal's other counters to his critics could be cited here ("smear", "McCarthyite", "neocon", etc) the writers of the third-party sources cited here would be thoroughly exposed in no time. As I began you are making an issue of the deleted SPLC article which is never likely to be cited here. Philip Cross (talk) 09:35, 14 August 2020 (UTC)


 * That this article is "by someone responding to an accusation" makes it non-objective for fact claims. That this article was not fact-checked shows that the publisher is not RS. Your claim that I am "making an issue of the deleted SPLC article" is nonsense. Everything you have offered is off-target, a distraction, and non-responsive. Humanengr (talk) 09:43, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * You are taking as gospel truth the claims of Max Blumenthal who has not written for a reliable source in years and whose main outlets are deprecated (The Grayzone, RT, Sputnik) over Charles Davis who frequently writes for The Daily Beast and Bellingcat (as well as New Politics) which have an appropriate status for inclusion in Wikipedia articles. We are not reaching any kind of resolution here. Please take these issues to Reliable sources/Noticeboard. Philip Cross (talk) 10:05, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

Re taking this somewhere else, I was thinking similarly. Will notify. Humanengr (talk) 10:10, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

Palestine Book Awards
, : Regarding the claims that this award is non-notable :  The award is not limited to  coverage by its sponsor Middle East Monitor, but is also mentioned in other WP:RS and/or by notable organizations: Hence, I have restored mention of the award. --David Tornheim (talk) 21:38, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Middle East Eye:
 * recognized by Stanford University Press: here
 * The Muslim News here
 * attacked by Louis D. Brandeis Center for Human Rights Under Law here
 * mentioned in culture section of Iran Daily
 * mentioned in culture section of Iran Daily
 * Thanks for doing the research. Doug Weller  talk 15:13, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

The 51 Day War (2015)
The section Max_Blumenthal lacks WP:NPOV. I did a quick Google search on the book, which shows that the overwhelming majority of reviews of the book are favorable, e.g. L.A. Review of Books, Kirkus Reviews, In these Times. I don't understand why a single negative review should dominate the section. It is WP:UNDUE. It can be removed as WP:UNDUE, or--better--balanced by a representative sample which includes the favorable reviews. I believe the bias tag needs to stay until this section appropriately summarizes the WP:RS reporting on this book. --David Tornheim (talk) 00:13, 29 December 2019 (UTC)


 * As you suggested, the Los Angeles Review of Books and Kirkus Reviews are now cited, although the LARB reviewer commending his treatment of the "resistance", or rather Hamas, is probably not what you had in mind. If articles are not to be overwhelmed by minutiae, it helps to provide claims/evidence of the subject's sympathies. If Blumenthal has said something like "I am ambivalent about/against Hamas", or words to the effect, that could be cited as well. It seems unlikely he has. Philip Cross (talk) 14:03, 30 December 2019 (UTC)


 * When you cite a source like that you have to be WP:NPOV, not to simply add the quotes that you think are most likely to make the subject look bad, inconsistent, etc. It looks a lot like WP:OR.  Instead, please summarize what the source says about him, which I am not seeing.  I may take this to an WP:NPOV/N because of my concerns that these quotes are not accurately representing the WP:RS. --David Tornheim (talk) 18:22, 30 December 2019 (UTC)


 * On the contrary, there are two paragraphs dedicated to the Blumenthal's coverage of the "resistance" in Sonali Kolhatkar's LARB review (and the Israeli response) beginning: "But what sets this reportage apart is the author’s added focus on Palestinian resistance...", from which I drew. A biographical article on Blumenthal is likely to discuss his personal qualities and there are other Wikipedia articles about the war itself in which his work is cited. Citing the reference to "Blumenthal’s urgent prose", or similar, is insubstantial, and much of the review is an outline of the war itself though drawing on the book. Philip Cross (talk) 19:12, 30 December 2019 (UTC)