Talk:Maximilian von Spee/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:58, 1 September 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:58, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
 * No DABs, nor external links.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * One duplicate link in the lede.
 * Fixed
 * came back aboard "reboarded"?
 * Sure
 * as it turned out, Glasgow was joined by the armored cruisers Good Hope and Monmouth and the auxiliary cruiser Otranto. After discovering the entire squadron at Coronel This isn't quite how I remember the early movements before the battle.
 * I'm not sure exactly what you're getting at here - Spee thought Glasgow was alone, but in fact the rest of the squadron met her off Coronel the day of the battle.
 * As I suspected, I didn't have it quite right; I'd thought that Leipzig actually spotted Glasgow before the latter rendezvoused with Craddock. But I'd still change "at Coronel" to "off Coronel".--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:36, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Watch your italicizations.
 * Think I caught it - were there any others?
 * Not that I see.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:36, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Link guard ship, scrap, scuttled, frigate, training ship--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:23, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
 * All linked