Talk:May Declaration/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:48, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I can find. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Austria–Hungary" en-dash or not? I see both variants here.
 * Should be hyphen, changed (T)
 * The map (on my screen) is to the left of the bottom of the infobox so practically halves the width of the screen for text.
 * Reformatted, hopefully appears better now (it does on my screen) (T)
 * Surprised that the author's name is not mentioned in the lead?
 * Added now (T)
 * "the United States, whose " not sure we need to link this.
 * You're right, that's overlinking (T)
 * "Anton Korošec, led the..." image caption is a complete sentence so needs a full stop.
 * Added for this and the one noted below (T)
 * "the Roman Catholic Zagreb Archbishop Antun Bauer" sea of blue.
 * Rephrased to move links apart (T)
 * "Ante Trumbić led the..." also needs a full stop.
 * Ref 3 should be pp.
 * Changed as suggested (T)
 * Pavlowitch's year range needs an en-dash.
 * Replaced with endash (T)

thank you for the review. I think I have addressed all the concerns set out above. I have reformatted the map to display as a standard image with a caption, so I expect it displays better now. Could you please have another look? Cheers--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:12, 12 September 2021 (UTC)