Talk:May God have mercy upon your soul/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mr rnddude (talk · contribs) 07:20, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi there I will be taking a look at completing the review for this article, I expect that my review will be up later today. Mr rnddude (talk) 07:20, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

I will be using the above table to complete the review. Mr rnddude (talk) 07:20, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
 * , I have completed my initial review of the article you have nominated. I will note that my, and another editor's, main concern is with reference to WP:OR. It appears that you have drawn certain conclusions that your sources have not, these conclusions may be correct but Wikipedia doesn't allow for an editor to draw those conclusions. I haven't reviewed 3a and b as I cannot drawn any definitive conclusions about it yet. I commend the work you have done thus far, and, I feel it is possible to bring this article to GA standard within a week. If you need any assistance feel free to ping me. Mr rnddude (talk) 11:51, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
 * With regard to the photo, it was published in the Daily Mirror in 1912 so it is ineligible for copyright according to the above.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 21:18, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have amended the article in accordance with your suggestions. Could you give it another look please?  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 07:35, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have added a few more sourced and reworded some of the areas that you were concerned about.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 15:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * , practically all but the last issue have been addressed. Can you find a source that states that the usage of the phrase is meant as a prayer on the soul of the condemned. I don't think that it would be too difficult to find, I'll take a look myself. An example of it won't pass as a conclusion, GA will require a source to draw the conclusion and not the reader or any editor. Mr rnddude (talk) 16:06, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Oops, oversight on my part. I had found that Christian Register source that specifically says its a prayer, but just forgot to copy it into that sentence.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 16:11, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * , I am now satisfied to pass this article for GA. Thanks for your efforts. Turns out, phrases, even common ones, are not generally the subject of in-depth analysis (there are of course exceptions). Good work. Mr rnddude (talk) 16:21, 4 August 2016 (UTC)