Talk:Maya Codex of Mexico/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Maunus (talk · contribs) 18:48, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Review
I will review this article over the coming week.


 * Some observations:
 * 1) I find that one aspect of the codex's known history is missing: its return to Mexico. One paper suggests that this is a signficiant event in itself. Vitelli, K. D. (1977). The Antiquities Market. Journal of Field Archaeology, 4(4), 459-472. on page 461 writes: "The 1970 United States-Mexico artifacts treaty should also be well known to all. This treaty covers all archaeological, historical, or cultural property of Mexico and as such is more extensive in its scope than PL 92-587. To invoke this treaty, however, the Attorney General of Mexico has to make a request to the Department of Justice to use any law at its disposal to recover an item by civil suit. Because of the complicated machinery of the treaty it has been invoked only a few times, notably in the seizure and return of the Grolier Codex to Mexico in 1976." She suggests reading Karl Meyer's 1977 "The Plundered Past" for more information. Unfortunately my library only has the 1973 edition of this book, which presumably does not include this information. Perhaps including the information from Vitelli would be a good idea?
 * Thanks for this: I don't have access to the book either, but have pulled the relevant info from the journal article as suggested. Simon Burchell (talk) 12:38, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Please take a look at the journal article: Vitelli, K. D. (1977). The Antiquities Market. Journal of Field Archaeology, 4(4), 459-472.. It appears to be is incorrectly cited by Jstor. Vitelli is the editor of the "The Antiquities Market" section of the journal but the relevant section is actually written by Bruhns, Karen Olsen "Seizure of Precolumbian Antiquities in San Franciso; The Relevance of Current Legislation to Stopping the Illicit Commerce in Artifacts", pp.460-462. In her article Bruhns does not cite where she got information concerning the extradition of the Grolier Codex back to Mexico. ACMelendez (talk) 01:22, 21 February 2015 (UTC) (talk)
 * Yes, regardless of who wrote that section the information is cited to Meyer 1976 (who apparently talked with Coe already on the first showing of the Codex). Btw. other publications also cite this as Vitelli 1977 for some reason, I wonder if we should follow that practice or cite it as Bruhns in Vitelli 1977.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 16:35, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
 * For scholarship, I think that the reference should be cited as Bruhns in Vitelli. If you read the text box at the beginning of the "The Antiquies Market", Vitelli is inviting "reports" from potential contributors, meaning these "reports" are written by persons other than Vitelli. Also, in Meyer 1977 (paperback) does this reference indicate that the 1977 is a "second edition" or is it only a paperback edition of 1973. We have Meyer 1973 hardback 1st ed which has same page numbering as 1977 paperback (which we don't have). In the 1977 do you see reference to the US Attorney General extradition of the Grolier Codex to Mexico. ACMelendez (talk) 00:23, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I have corrected the Bruhns reference, and placed Vitelli as the editor. I must admit, I just pulled the referencing info from the JSTOR summary. Simon Burchell (talk) 11:53, 22 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) The representation of Nikolai Grube's viewpoint bothers me for some reason - We only have access to the first supportive statement in Baudez' summary and I have not been able to access the 2000 book to check it. It is interesting to be sure, but also seems a little odd to add two contradictory statements by the same scholar without further discussion. Maybe writing Grube an email to ask about what made him change his mind would make sense? It would be OR, of course to include in the text but it is allowed in order to make better sense of sources and make editorial decision about best how to include specific information from sources. What is Baudez' credentials and what specifically makes him reject its possible divinatory functions? Based on scholarly reputation alone I would weigh Grube's statements about the accuracy of it as a venus almanac above Baudez, since Grube is a well established authority on glyphs and calendrics.
 * My (earlier) source states that Grube considered that the codex was genuine. Someone came by later to add that his opinion had changed. Baudez is (or rather was - French wiki says he died recently) a French Mesoamericanist, archaeologist and iconographer, specializing in Mesoamerican ritual. I think the difference is that Baudez has written a fairly lengthy critique of the codex, whereas I have not seen an equivalent study from Grube (even the cited article is in German, which I don't speak). Simon Burchell (talk) 22:37, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Ok, I think this needs to be clarified and both sources need to be consulted if we are to attribute any view to Grube. If we are not sure what he currently believesor what he has in fact written then we shouldnt attribute a view to him.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 21:01, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I've sent him an email, if he replies that may help with this point. Simon Burchell (talk) 20:29, 23 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) The doubts that have been cast on Saenz' acquisition could probably use some more fleshing out. At present it stands almost as an innuendo.
 * This sentence really refers back to the Discovery section, however I've added a little detail from Yates. Simon Burchell (talk) 12:52, 19 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) The opening of the "authenticity" section is a little odd, jumping from 2012 in one sentence and back to Thompson in the next. A better formulation would perhaps be that it has been disputed ever since its first public appearance.
 * Fair point. I dropped that sentence in recently, to try to give a marker for future article development (i.e. find decent sources later than 2012) - I've moved the sentence. Simon Burchell (talk) 13:06, 19 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) Who considers the sense of perspective in the illustration on page 9 to be alien to Mesoamerican art? (attribution in text would be good) Also I dont actually see any perspective whatsoever in the illustration - looks to me as if the head is simply drawn larger, which may look like perspective but isnt necessarily meant that way.
 * The detail in question is the lower portion of the captive; the legs are viewed as if partially from above, which is certainly unusual - the upper legs overlay the partially visible lower legs and feet, at an angle that I certainly haven't seen elsewhere in pre-Columbian Mesoamerican art. Baudez considers this viewpoint to be anachronistic; this sentence is cited to him, but I will drop his name into the para. Simon Burchell (talk) 22:40, 18 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) In 2008 it was reported - but by whom? And who had done the tests? (is it the Ruvalcalba tests mentioned further down - if so the order is confusing) Reference to the actual report of the tests would be good. There are a couple of passive constructions like this where direct attribution would be better "this is considered unusual" etc.
 * I used this particular construction because the investigation results were published in 2008, but the date of the investigation itself was not specified. I've rephrased the sentence. Simon Burchell (talk) 13:10, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I think it is fine to just refer to the year of publication. "A 2008 study by Ruvalcaba et al. reported that" would be best I think.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 21:01, 19 February 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) I have added Michael Coe (1973a) "The Maya Scribe and His World" (which I have in front of me) to the reference section. It is a primary reference and I have begun to cite it as the primary rather than secondary references such as Baudez, etc. when applicable. Also, you should be aware that the Coe (1973b) "The Grolier Codex" is in actuality an edited document compiled by Randa Markenke, the author of the "MAYA HIEROGLYPHIC WRITING The Ancient Maya Codices: The Grolier Codex" for FAMSI. Working with Justin Kerr, Marhenke has compiled Coe's text from the primary source document "The Maya Scribe and His World" 1973, p. 150-154 and added set of Kerr photographs (which were NOT published in the 1973 "The Maya Scribe and His World"). Please note how this document is described on FAMSI webpage  "For the complete set of photographs of the Grolier Codex by Justin Kerr with commentary from The Maya Scribe and His World by Michael D. Coe click here". The Kerr photographs used in this edited "The Grolier Codex" PDF document are the same Kerr photographs linked via the "External Link" on the Grolier Codex Wikipedia article page.  ACMelendez (talk) 00:23, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Note that Wikipedia prefers secondary sources over primary, but in this case it looks fine. Either reference would stand, but be aware that, in order to prevent overproliferation of citemarks, the cite may be placed at the end of several sentences (or an entire paragraph) written from the same source. If placing another reference in the middle, the original reference (at the end) needs to be re-applied to any text prior to the text you are citing, in order to maintain clarity of referencing.
 * EXAMPLE:
 * This is the first piece of information. All of this is cited to the same source. But another reference will be added later. Which will break the flow of referencing.
 * Then we add an additional reference:
 * This is the first piece of information. All of this is cited to the same source. But another reference will be added later. Which will break the flow of referencing.
 * It now appears that the first sentence is referenced to the newly-inserted reference, when it should be cited to the original reference:
 * This is the first piece of information. All of this is cited to the same source. But another reference will be added later. Which will break the flow of referencing.
 * Simon Burchell (talk) 12:04, 22 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Other than this I think the article looks fine and pending your response and any edits you may make in response to my comments I think it will be an easy pass. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 22:21, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I'm editing from my Kindle, so will respond properly in a day or two when I'm better connected, but will drop in a couple of comments now. Simon Burchell (talk) 22:34, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I think I've dealt with each of your points above, and await your feedback. All the best, Simon Burchell (talk) 13:18, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Excellent, I will proceed to the formal review shortly.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 21:01, 19 February 2015 (UTC)


 * IN this piece Houston, Baines and Cooper clearly write from the assumption that the codex is authentic and that is displays a penetration of central Mexican iconographic principles into the Maya area. Last Writing: Script Obsolescence in Egypt, Mesopotamia, and Mesoamerica, Stephen Houston, John Baines and Jerrold Cooper. Comparative Studies in Society and History Vol. 45, No. 3 (Jul., 2003), pp. 430-479. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 00:45, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I've looked at the article you mention, and its info on the Grolier Codex seems to be sourced entirely from Coe's 1973 publication, without reference to later studies of the document. However, I will summarise its interpretation in the article, hopefully later today. Simon Burchell (talk) 10:07, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I've dropped in a sentence referencing the article in the Authenticity section. Simon Burchell (talk) 20:08, 23 February 2015 (UTC)


 * I have corrected the FAMSI reference to the following: Marhenke, Randa (2012-02-15). "MAYA HIEROGLYPHIC WRITING The Ancient Maya Codices: The Grolier Codex". Foundation for the Advancement of Mesoamerican Studies, Inc. (FAMSI). See author's title page, last rev. date, & table of contents.  One can see Marhenke stated as author of the "MAYA HIEROGLYPHIC WRITING The Ancient Maya Codicies", the last article revision date (2012-02-15), and the table of contents with link to "The Grolier Codex" webpage here .ACMelendez (talk) 06:36, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
 * That's great, many thanks! Best regards, Simon Burchell (talk) 17:08, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

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Rsult: So bascially even if I wanted to fail this article I would have no excuse. Congratulations with another well researched and written article.·maunus · snunɐɯ· 17:06, 12 March 2015 (UTC)