Talk:Maybe This Christmas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:51, 8 September 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Allmusic is not so reliable regarding genres and dates, so it is better to replace it. New Age and Christmas does not seem to fit; New Age is more esoterical
 * What has Jul (Norway) anything to do with the album?
 * There are a bit too much quotes in the first section; try rewording with your own words or use indirect speech. Eg " as "[painful]"" could be surely "as painful"
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Hold--Kürbis (✔) 11:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Hold--Kürbis (✔) 11:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * I removed New Age, but surely Christmas is applicable. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Removed "July (Norway)" in the See also section. (I had previously thought someone might want more information about the Norwegian tradition given the sentence or two about Little Christmas Eve.) -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Corrected "painful". I removed quotation marks from "shuffling beat"--I think this is a musical term and not a descriptor. Similarly, I replaced "down-tempo" with a linked version of downtempo, replacing a descriptor with a musical term. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I will pass it now. Meets criteria. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 13:16, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your time. Much appreciated! -- Another Believer  ( Talk ) 15:14, 12 September 2012 (UTC)