Talk:McEwan's/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Puffin (talk · contribs) 11:53, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

The references need sorting. Here are the problems:

FN 1: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date. See Bare URLs.

FN 2: The link used on this reference does not lead where you want it to, it seems to be a book, so you should use cite book and include the author, publishing date and page number.

FN 3: This is the same as FN 2, you can use Template:Rp for different page numbers, or name your references using cite book so the reference isn't duplicated.

FN 4: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 6: What makes this reliable? Needs author.

FN 7: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 8: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 9: You should use cite news.

FN 10: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 11: You need to use cite book and provide a publishing date.

FN 13: You need to use cite news. Also, why do you say "the faintest whiff of city's beer tradition left" in the reference? Is it a quote?

FN 14: Dead link, needs to be replaced.

FN 15: Should use cite news or cite web.

FN 16: Should use cite news or cite web.

FN 18: Should use cite news.

FN 19: I don't know what this is, but it needs to use a ref template and link somewhere if it can.

FN 20: Dead link, needs to be replaced.

FN 21: cite journal maybe? Multi page PDFs need page numbers.

FN 22: Should use cite news.

FN 23: Needs the appropriate reference template, it is a multi page PDF and so requires page numbers.

FN 24: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 25: Dead link, needs to be replaced.

FN 26: Needs the appropriate reference template, it is a multi page PDF and so requires page numbers.

FN 27: Needs the appropriate reference template, it is a multi page PDF and so requires page numbers.

FN 28: I don't know why it leads here. You also need to use cite web.

FN 29: You need to use cite web for this and provide the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

FN 30: It seems to be a blog and so is not reliable.

FN 31: Should use cite news.  Puffin  Let's talk! 12:56, 15 April 2012 (UTC)