Talk:McGarrah Jessee

Prose and tone
Some of the terminology on this article, such as "reputation for establishing deep relationships with its clients" and "award-winning brand campaign" (there are several other examples as well) sound more like a internal company prospectus or advertisement, rather than an encyclopedia entry. Such terms constitute puffery and should be avoided (and reworded). This applies even if gathered from sourced information. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! &lrm; 01:03, 13 September 2010 (UTC)

These have been addressed. Removing tags. Jal6636 (talk) 12:23, 13 September 2010 (UTC)