Talk:Me & the Rhythm/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 22:33, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

Review coming tomorrow... Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:33, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * October 2, 2015 to iTunes and other digital download platforms as the album's → In the lead, we don't need such an exact description of where it was released; please shorten to "October 2, 2015 for digital download as the album's..."
 * Gomez has called the song a personal → change "the song" with "the track" to avoid the repetition of words
 * is a dance, disco, R&B and synthpop song → is a synthpop-influenced dance, disco and R&B song
 * That's saying something entirly different. Is that what the sources reflect?  danny music editor  oops 02:52, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry, it was my mistake, you can leave it like it is. I also agree with your other points in the review. Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:03, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * and "smoky" synths throughout its instrumentation → Remove "throughout its instrumentation"
 * with praise directed towards its vintage disco sound → with praise directed at its vintage disco sound
 * The track was included on the setlist for Gomez's 2016 → It was subsequently included on the setlist for the singer's 2016

Infobox

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Recording and release

 * of "Good for You" on music charts worldwide → of "Good for You" on music charts worldwide in [YEAR] (for context)
 * with label representatives → of which label?
 * Me & the Rhythm" was written by → syntax error in the song's title
 * Unlink all the writers in the same sentence and only refer to them by their last name
 * while John Hanes was the mixing engineer" → syntax error; remove the "
 * It was recorded and mixed in Wolf Cousins Studios → It was recorded and mixed at Wolf Cousins Studios
 * is a lot like Justin and I → is a lot like Justin [Tranter] and I; this could be confused with Justin Bieber
 * We need the exact release date of "Me & the Rhythm", the format and the label(s) accompanied by a reliable source
 * Release year for "Same Old Love" in brackets

Composition

 * as a dance,[10] and disco song,[11] R&B[12] with → as a dance,[10] disco,[11] and R&B song[12] with
 * consisting of deep house beats and steel drums,[14] smoky synths and pulsating percussion → consisting of deep house beats, steel drums,[14] smoky synths and pulsating percussion
 * Zach Dionne of Fuse compared the song → change "compared" with "likened" to avoid word repettion
 * album Emotion and Digital Spy's Lewis Corner → album Emotion; Digital Spy's Lewis Corner
 * Meanwhile, Mike Wass of Idolator → Remove "Meanwhile,"
 * Link "Idolator" to its article
 * noted that the song is "the most obvious → past tense
 * Again with the past tense that I noted elsewhere...not really agreeing with it.


 * is about losing one's inhibitions and losing oneself while dancing → is about losing one's inhibitions while dancing
 * gives "a Janet Jackson-esque speaking verse → syntax error

Critical reception

 * "simplicity and sophistication" to the songs's production → say "track's" to avoid word repetition
 * highlighted that the song is "a pop anthem → past tense
 * That doesn't make sense to me. Why is this more appropriate? It's not like the song is gone forever.  danny music editor  oops 02:52, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * [e]qually as catchy as her first single, → link "her first single" to her debut solo single
 * There's ambiguity to this statement that makes me uncomfortable doing this. Is she referring to Come and Get It or Good for You?


 * noting that it has got a seductive → noting that it had a seductive
 * while declaring that the song → while declaring that it (repetition)
 * italcize "Revival" in the following quote

Commercial performance

 * peaking at number 106 → reaching number six (we're talking about the Bubbling Under, not the Hot 100 here)
 * on the (French SNEP Singles Chart) → on the French Singles Chart
 * On the Czech Republic and Slovakia → On the Czech and Slovak
 * Singles Digitál Top 100 chart the song → Singles Digitál Top 100 charts, the song
 * number 83 and 68 → numbers 83 and 68

Credits and personnel

 * Credits and personnel adapted from Revival album liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Revival
 * Unlink "liner notes"
 * Unlink "Selena Gomez"

Charts

 * Everything fine here ;)

Copy-violation

 * 23.7% is a very good score!

Outcome

 * for 7 days. Still has some significant issues, but they can easily be fixed in the given time span. Good luck and best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:34, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Really? -_- I only nominated this because I believed it was perfect and it shouldn't have been delisted to begin with (WP:DENY is a terrible excuse to delist, and there should've been more discussion on it). Oh well. I may or may not complete that in 7 days because my other noms have priority, but I'll get it eventually.  danny music editor  oops 14:56, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I can surely give you more time to edit, and you can maybe consider asking someone else to adress my concerns if you want to. Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:10, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I have done everything that does not have a query or a "working" marker next to it (I think).  danny music editor  oops 02:52, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Remember you still have to work on some sections. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:54, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

Should be finished now.  danny music editor  oops 17:31, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Passing! Congratulations; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:38, 5 June 2018 (UTC)