Talk:Me Against the Music/GA1

GA Review
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I am the reviewer-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   04:47, 4 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * Working on the song
 * reaching number one in countries such as -> Re-word

Background and recording

 * commented she liked the track -> that

Composition
Looks good

Critical reception

 * 2003 MTV Music Video Awards.".
 * Dorian Lynskey of The Guardian noted the it as -> Noted it
 * denounced the track as a "'Into the Groove' redux -> an

Chart performance

 * It was Spears 10th chart hit, as well as the first of her entries that she had co-written -> You haven't mentioned her co-writing the song yet. I think is its her first, its something worth mentioning in previous sections.
 * There aren't any sources stating that she wrote it other than the writing credits. Maybe she pulled a Beyoncé and stole them :P I don't know really. Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
 * since "Love Don't Live Here Anymore" -> You should provide the year.
 * On the issue dated November 29, 2003, "Me Against the Music" peaked at number thirty-five -> Issues of what?
 * Billboard issue? Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)

Music video (development)
Looks good.

Synopsis
Looks good.

Release and reception
Looks good.

Live performances

 * she performed in American music show TRL -> on the
 * at Staples Center. -> at the

Cover version
Looks good.

Overall, really good job! Every article you do gets better and better :).-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   15:52, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:25, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Good job! I'm passing it.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   00:11, 5 November 2010 (UTC)