Talk:Media convergence

Does anyone else think this article looks like an Apple advertisement? I would edit it myself, but I'm not sure about Wikipedia's policy on this. Also, I might just be overreacting.

This sentence looks like it is coming straight out of someone's high-school essay: "Another invention of convergence is the innovation of the iPhone which is currently the ultimate object of convergence."

rm_you 21:57, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I removed the following two sentences to maintain NPOV: "Another invention of convergence is the innovation of the iPhone which is currently the ultimate object of convergence. This is because it includes the phone, internet, radio and video." ~ Enviroboy TalkContribs - 05:14, 23 October 2007 (UTC)