Talk:Meech Lake Accord/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:42, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be posting a review of this in a few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:42, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written. Here are my comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 15:53, 5 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * The main issue is the lot of unsourced parts. We need inline citations for each part.
 * In the caption of the first image, we need a source for the quote
 * In note 2, write "p." 128.
 * No dablinks, no copyvio detected


 * Prelude
 * Prime Minister Pierre Trudeau Name the country as well when you begin with the main article
 * Wikilink constitutional veto


 * Consensus at Meech Lake
 * Mulroney acted as chair Seems he was acting for someone absent, why not simply "was the chair"?


 * Initial reaction
 * Trudeau's intervention created the first major opposition to the consensus Looks like repetition from the previous para
 * The 2nd and 3rd paras could be merged
 * "Pierre Trudeau" is a duplink.


 * "The Last Supper"
 * After physically being stopped  I think "After being physically stopped" reads better


 * The final days
 * Italics for "The Globe and Mail"


 * Aftermath
 * On June 25, 500,000 Quebecers The numbers may look confusing
 * 61%–64% in favour Only one "%" after "64" per the MOS.


 * Sources
 * Ref. 11 needs DMY date, and write the publisher properly and not as a website name
 * Ref. 26 needs proper formatting

Please respond by 12 June. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:26, 7 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks, have made a few of the changes, will proceed with more citations. Knoper (talk) 01:31, 11 June 2016 (UTC)


 * No response since 10 days. I can give you two more days to respond. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 10:37, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Failed due to lack of response from the nominator. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:41, 24 June 2016 (UTC)