Talk:Meena Kumari (book)

GOCE copyedit request

 * After his first book Bombay: A Private View (1971), a memoir of his experience in Bombay, became a commercial success, Mehta—who was working as a copywriter—was motivated to write more books in the future. This seems more appropriate after the lead. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. Removed from lead. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:25, 22 December 2021 (UTC)


 * The book subsequently starred in more commercially and critically successful [...] I think this is supposed to be Kumari the person, not the book? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * . — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:25, 22 December 2021 (UTC)


 * [...] the film opened to average reception commercially but the box office collection [...] Emphasis added. What does this mean? Is it supposed to refer to the amount that was grossed (definition 2)? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. Changed it to revenue. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:33, 22 December 2021 (UTC)


 * 3,000 copies of the first edition were sold out after six days. Is this supposed to mean the first edition only had 3,000 copies circulating the market? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * . — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:28, 22 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Mehta noted in the book's foreword [...] Which book? Lucknow Boy? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * . — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:29, 22 December 2021 (UTC)


 * However, none of which the latter kept and Mehta described it as "a big void" of the book. What is this sentence supposed to mean? It's never made clear what the latter (whom I assume to be Dharmendra) didn't keep. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * . I saw the changes you made but the sentence still doesn't make sense: as it reads right now, it claims that Mehta met with Dharmendra several times, but that these meetings didn't actually happen. What exactly is none of which referring to? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:37, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. Fixed sentence up. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 06:31, 23 December 2021 (UTC)


 * [...] when Luis Vaz of Jaico Publishing House approached Mehta to offer him writing a biography on Kumari as soon as she died in March 1972. Already edited. What exactly did they offer Mehta? What is he writing the biography in exchange for? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * ❌. Leaving for the requester to find more information. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:31, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Looking forward to your responses,. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Done, but I can't find the reason Vaz offered Mehta to writing the book as far as I browse on it on the Internet. Much deeper research for this one will be done as soon as possible. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:37, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * That sentence about Dharmendra still doesn't make sense. Please reply to the comment. — Tenryuu 🐲  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:39, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:59, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'm going to give one quick look tomorrow to see everything's in order. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 06:31, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @Nicholas Michael Halim: I think that's everything done on my end. Best of luck with the nomination! — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 05:14, 24 December 2021 (UTC)