Talk:Meena Kumari (book)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 15:04, 19 February 2022 (UTC) Nominator: Nicholas Michael Halim (talk · contribs) at 05:15, 24 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments
Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:54, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
 * as soon as she died in March 1972 — "soon after her death in March 1972"
 * Her performance as a desperate wife in the 1962 romantic drama Sahib Bibi Aur Ghulam is regarded as one of her career's bests — who regards it?
 * the film itself failed at the box office — remove 'itself'
 * All 3,000 copies of the first edition were sold out after six days. — exactly 3,000, or approximately 3,000?
 * visible, but ... it was — add a non-breaking space before the ellipsis.
 * It was received positively by many critics — this is cited to a primary source, where the author is same as the author of the book. We'll need secondary sources for such evaluative claims.
 * This still needs a secondary source: Critics showed enthusiastic response to it – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 05:29, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:47, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Change:
 * to
 * Rest good. I should note that there are various primary sources used, but mostly are used for direct quotations and content of the book, which should be fine.
 * Images can take ALT text
 * Rest good. I should note that there are various primary sources used, but mostly are used for direct quotations and content of the book, which should be fine.
 * Images can take ALT text
 * Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:39, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

Promoting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:44, 20 February 2022 (UTC)