Talk:Megalodon/GA2

GA Reassessment

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 * References 42, 49, 59, 60 and 15 have been edited to resolve the issues raised in the GA reassessment review point 2(a). However, I don't know what the comment "There are also two external links" refers to. WolfmanSF (talk) 03:33, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry for not being descriptive enough on that. I am talking about 1. http://las.depaul.edu/env/People/KenshuShimada/ShimadaResearch/index.asp (info) [depaul.edu] and 2. A video clip depicting aggressive interspecific interactions between Megalodon and a pod of killer odontoceti (B. shigensis ) (info) [2hgs.com]. Both aren't cited right, and anyways they don't work. I have added more info above too. <em style="font-family:Courier;color:green">Ob <em style="font-family:Courier;color:#009ACD">tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 04:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The dead external links have now been fixed. WolfmanSF (talk) 17:00, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * By the way, what is the problem with links that change their path? I have a hard time believing that http://www.google.com/books?id=2My8M5tL-KIC&printsec=frontcover#v=onepage&q&f=false would be preferred over the equivalent http://google.com/books?id=2My8M5tL-KIC&printsec=frontcover, for example. WolfmanSF (talk) 21:47, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I have updated above. #64 changes and doesn't give any info. and #10 is still a dead link, <em style="font-family:Courier;color:green">Ob <em style="font-family:Courier;color:#009ACD">tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 23:00, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The links in refs 10, 64 and 68 have been fixed. WolfmanSF (talk) 07:42, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Regarding GA reassessment review point 1(b), I have edited a couple conversions, but I don't know which ones you object to. WolfmanSF (talk) 17:12, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * There's a few, if you just take a brief scan you'll find them all, if you want I can look again and note them for you. <em style="font-family:Courier;color:green">Ob <em style="font-family:Courier;color:#009ACD">tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 23:27, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Regarding GA reassessment review point 3(b), concerning the "Anatomy" section, it would again be helpful to know where, in the reviewer's opinion, the text "branches off too far." In general, I don't understand the practice of suggesting that a problem exists and then being coy about what that problem is. WolfmanSF (talk) 15:59, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
 * An example would be in length estimates. Just make one subsection that has Methods and describe each you do not need to go too indepth you don't need a section for each Person, just summarize them in one. <em style="font-family:Courier;color:green">Ob <em style="font-family:Courier;color:#009ACD">tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 22:47, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
 * OK. Since this section is not my work, I'm going to let LeGenD or others decide if they see fit to follow up on your suggestion. WolfmanSF (talk) 22:57, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
 * However, given that the length estimation has been a problematic and controversial subject, as well as one of very great interest, I'm not convinced that your suggestion is really appropriate. WolfmanSF (talk) 15:27, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The review above, has been postponed and is waiting for a copyedit by the GOCE. Please do not modify this review. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the Talk:Megalodon. No further edits should be made to this section until the copyedit is over.