Talk:Megalograptus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:33, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Add a short description to the top of the article with the template short description.
 * Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Consider adding ALT to images (this is not a GA criteria but is good practice per MOS:ALT).
 * Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "The two most distinctive features of Megalograptus was its massive and spined forward-facing appendages, far larger than similar structures in other eurypterids, and its telson (final body segment), which was surrounded by unique "cercal blades", capable of grasping. " – should be "were" as the features are plural.
 * Fixed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Megalograptus are known from what was once near-shore marine " – consider rewording.
 * Reworded and made more concise. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "unsually" – typo.
 * Fixed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "The appendages of Megalograptus, about 3.5 times the length of the carapace were significantly larger than those of Mixopterus" – add comma after "carapace".
 * Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Megalograptus was the structure formed by the telson and the immediate preceding segment (the pretelson)." – I believe should be the adverb "immediately".
 * Yes, fixed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "On thecarapace, they were flat and disc-like and scattered without any obvious pattern" – Add space between "the carapace".
 * Fixed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 08:43, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Excellent work. This article is now ready to review. simongraham (talk) 19:03, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Assessment
 Comprehension: The comprehension is good.

Verifiability: The article is verifiable.

Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive.

Neutrality: The article is neutral.

Stability: The article is stable. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.

Overall: Pass/fail. 