Talk:Mehran Spice and Food Industries

Neutrality issues
This article has definite neutrality issues. I have listed all those I find a little dodgy below:


 * "Mehran Spice & Food Industries is Pakistan’s leading food manufacturer." - Unreferenced

History

 * "within a few years the company became one of the leading spice & food industries globally." - Unreferenced and not neutral POV
 * "equipped with the most advanced rice plant from Germany." - The reference to this is poorly written and seems (possibly) biased: a second opinion on this would be most welcome.
 * "Mehran’s Basmati rice is much loved" - reference doesn't actually say it is 'much loved', so why does the article?
 * "They are a global brand that has presence in more than 50 countries." - Unreferenced

Awards

 * "they continue to win hearts with their quality products and economical prices." - not neutral POV

Chairman

 * "He believes in providing optimum quality of food." - according to whom?
 * "by his visionary business skills and compassion for this countrymen." - not neutral POV
 * "He is a philanthropist by nature and has done tremendous work for the welfare of his native district Thar." - This whole sentence is almost the opposite of neutral POV

These all need to be referenced suitably with reliable sources or changed/removed.

Yours, Gazamp (talk) 18:49, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Neutrality Issues Resolved
In view of the above mentioned issues, several changes have been made which are mentioned below after '||'


 * "Mehran Spice & Food Industries is Pakistan’s leading food manufacturer." - Unreferenced                                      || has been removed

History

 * "within a few years the company became one of the leading spice & food industries globally." - Unreferenced and not neutral POV   || has been removed
 * "equipped with the most advanced rice plant from Germany." - The reference to this is poorly written and seems (possibly) biased: a second opinion on this would be most welcome.                                                       || it is not biased. However, it has been made neutral.
 * "Mehran’s Basmati rice is much loved" - reference doesn't actually say it is 'much loved', so why does the article?               || has been edited
 * "They are a global brand that has presence in more than 50 countries." - Unreferenced                                             || reference has been added

Awards

 * "they continue to win hearts with their quality products and economical prices." - not neutral POV                                 || removed

Chairman

 * "He believes in providing optimum quality of food." - according to whom?                                                           || removed
 * "by his visionary business skills and compassion for this countrymen." - not neutral POV                                           || removed
 * "He is a philanthropist by nature and has done tremendous work for the welfare of his native district Thar." - This whole sentence is almost the opposite of neutral POV  || has been removed

Proper link to Chairman Required
The reference of the chairman of the said company was broken, hence the line removed. Please add a proper reference 103.12.197.230 (talk) 13:15, 1 May 2023 (UTC)