Talk:Melanie Poole

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Oddball3029. Peer reviewers: UnoriginalUsername, Kingwhale.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:51, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Overall, this is a strong article. The “Career” section of the article gives the reader a good sense of Poole’s career as a whole. You made good use of tables for the filmography, which help to keep the article more organized. I made a few grammatical modifications to the article, but overall, it was well written. There are a few other changes that could be made. First, it would probably be a good idea to add an introductory paragraph at the top of the page. Secondly, you should consider adding an “Awards and Honours” section if she has won any. Also, if there is more information available, I would recommend adding to her biography. For example, if you could add any information about her birth, age, family, etc., it would make the article stronger.UnoriginalUsername (talk) 00:13, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review This article is written very well. there is a lot of information regarding her career which is good. A few things to change or add, would be an introductory paragraph or move the biography to be an introductory paragraph and write more about her early life, hometown, anything significant that made her choose her career path. Also if there is more information regarding her newer projects specifically the collaboration in Bollywood and Planet Love. Kingwhale (talk) 00:58, 10 November 2016 (UTC)