Talk:Melissa Cody

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bmbrizuela. Peer reviewers: Artisticg.

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Hello, welcome to my talk page. Any tips, corrections or recommendations are appreciated thank you.--Bmbrizuela (talk) 23:21, 10 February 2020 (UTC) The work I reviewed is Bmbrizuela on Melissa Cody. The link to the draft is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bmbrizuela/sandbox. The introduction provides clear insight to who the artist is, where she's from and what her credentials are. It also provides clear information of what her inspiration and what her life was like. The lead provided the necessary information, but is lacking an introductory sentence other than that it's written very well. The content that has been provided is very neutral and doesn't take on any positions. It's well written and provides the reader with more information about the artist. The information presented about the artist shows how she grew up around the art and began to incorporate her personal life into it. The content is backed up with secondary sources, all that work. The sources clearly demonstrate where the information came from and clearly written within the article projecting a very neutral tone. Overall the entire article is very clear to read and understand. However, on the artworks section of the article the World Traveler could use a bit more information pertaining to its influences. The description is well written it just doesn't have the influences and why it was made. In early life and education it's mentioned that the artist uses Navajo symbols, if anyone of those symbols are present in the artworks section you could tie those two together. Overall this article is very well written and very thorough. It's so clear and concise in all its information about the artist that while reading it I was learning so much about the artist. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Artisticg (talk • contribs) 04:35, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

HEY if you have time, do you mind looking over my work again please. I made some edits to it and will try to keep adding more. Thank you so much. Esong024 (talk) 06:42, 28 February 2020 (UTC)Esong024