Talk:Mental health in aviation

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Hi! This is my first time contributing to wikipedia, so I value any suggestions you may have! I tried to follow the guidelines as much as possible, but look forward to any suggestions you may have! Mbenderb1 (talk) 18:53, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Awesome work! You incorporated a lot of academic sources, used a Wikipedia style in your writing, and added appropriate headings and links to other Wikipedia pages. Great work! Skearns4 (talk) 17:23, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Hey Malachi! Great article! I think you should move the paragraph on the Minnesota Multiphasic test down to the solutions. In addition you could mention some prevalence figures for example statistics and data of number of pilots who have reported mental disorders on the job against pilots who were found by an airline. I think another way to attract the reader's attention and to show the importance of investigating mental health in aviation is to list accidents that have occurred as a result of mental health issues. You can also include links to your article on the Aviation Safety WikiPage, in the see also section. You can also put your link on the general Mental Health page and then under see also: Mental Health in Different Occupations --> Mental Health in Aviation. Mmiddei4 (talk) 18 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer Reveie
I've gone through your article and have made some changes to fix grammatical errors and make it flow better

A couple of things:


 * I don't understand the last paragraph in prevalence doesn't make sense to me. Is the MMPI a study or a tool? The last sentence makes it seem like a study but there's no context for this.


 * I think you need more citations because there are some sentences that state a fact but don't have a citation


 * 'This has been known since 1985' needs an explanation


 * Definitely expand on the studies you mentioned in causes — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jkorb (talk • contribs) 16:50, 23 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Someone who can't spell the word 'review' is trying to fix grammatical errors? Lord help us. 80.43.30.196 (talk) 13:53, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

List of Accidents Resulting from Mental Health
I believe this is important to include, as it shows its prevalence (and rather than just a random idea). Mbenderb1 (talk) 00:53, 5 December 2015 (UTC)