Talk:Mentats of Dune/Archive 1

External links modified
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I have just modified 3 one external links on Mentats of Dune. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Corrected formatting/usage for http://kjablog.com/?p=4946
 * Corrected formatting/usage for http://www.dunenovels.com/novel/sisterhood-dune
 * Corrected formatting/usage for http://www.dunenovels.com/articles/brainstorming-sisterhood-dune

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Plot summary
The plot summary is miserably written: it comes across as disjointed and confusing. If no one wants 2rewrite it, I shall gladly rewrite all by myself.Etillenecuit (talk) 00:49, 25 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Disjointed because it covers all of the many plot lines briefly? You can attempt a rewrite, but if you just intend to make it longer with more detail, you shouldn't.— TAnthonyTalk 01:03, 25 April 2016 (UTC)