Talk:Mercy Otis Warren

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Issues
Somebody are you there? This article is not like the other wikipedia articles. This is more like the book called Old Mc Donald Had a Farm. The details need to be more elaberate. Instead this is like a 4th grader wrote this so called article.<Koshi_Havo


 * Substantial improvement has been made, this article is well beyond stub and is at least start, in my view, if not B. ++Lar: t/c 16:01, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

It says She killed herself in 1974 (not true)

Issues again
This article needs some major cleanup again. Can we please discuss the possibility of removing what seems to be the addition of someone's essay. - Epousesquecido (talk) 17:36, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Since no one has responded to my request I am taking this article back to the October 19, 2008 revision. This is the last edit before someone seems to have added their term paper or essay which was not sourced correctly.  Please see WP:RS before adding new information.  Mercy Otis Warren was perhaps the most important women involved in the American Revolution, she deserves a better, longer and more informative article, but lets do it correctly. Thanks. - Epousesquecido (talk) 02:53, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

please correct the quote
In the second paragraph under the title "Marriage" there is a quote that is incorrect. It currently reads: "every domestic enjoyment depends on the impaired possession of civil and religious liberty". It should read: "every domestic enjoyment depends on the unimpaired possession of civil and religious liberty"...unimpaired rather than impaired...an important distinction. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.7.137.72 (talk) 19:53, 5 September 2013 (UTC)

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080924113620/http://streamer3.lacoe.edu:80/Americanhistory/enactments/Walters/Walters_biography.htm to http://streamer3.lacoe.edu/Americanhistory/enactments/Walters/Walters_biography.htm

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Vandalism
There have been several instances of vandalism in October 2015, by several users. Any reason for this? Can we lock the article or something? It doesn't appear to be an isolated incident. - Kzirkel (talk) 19:45, 20 October 2015 (UTC)