Talk:Mereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:51, 25 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox: Unlink "Indonesian language" per WP:OVERLINK
 * It's hardcoded into the template. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:39, 27 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Plot: "with whom she is also sleeping". Huh?
 * Changed to "with whom she is also having sex"


 * Cast: WP:MOS recommends using straight prose rather than bulleted and numbered lists where feasible. I'd look for a way to compress the cast list into several paragraphs
 * Not done. Compare FAs Manhunter and ?


 * Production: Link the US dollar
 * Done, although somewhat reluctantly since US$ is fairly familiar.


 * External links: TV.com link?
 * Not on that site. Most Indonesian films have poor entries on the usual EL destinations, if they have them at all.


 * External links: Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:27, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

More to come later today. TBrandley 15:02, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

More comments
 * Reception: "was also screened" "also" not needed
 * Done.


 * Reception: "warm reviews". Change to something like "positive reviews"
 * Done.


 * Awards → Accolades
 * Not done. Aside from them all being awards (the Citra Award, to be precise) previous FAs like Ruma Maida and ? use the same format.


 * Awards: Debold award titles per MOS:BOLD, WP:CONTEXTLINK
 * That's being automatically bolded by the table from having scope="row". I could remove that, but ACCESS says we need it. Which is the lesser of two evils? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:29, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Well; I'd say WP:ACCESS, since "scope=row" are important very. So, no changes needed, I suppose. Not sure.


 * References: Should be sub-sections as per MOS:ACCESS
 * Done.


 * External links: Categories still aren't sorted in alphabetical order
 * Forgot to mention this. "Indonesian language films" is hardcoded into the template. Do you know a way to override that?
 * Sorry, no. That's fine for now then.

Sorry for the wait. Your patiences was appreciated. Been a bit busy. Anyway, that's all. Cheers, TBrandley 16:26, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Wow; great work. Pass. TBrandley 23:36, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:17, 29 August 2012 (UTC)