Talk:Meshuggah/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:05, 19 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Some comments:
 * 1.A. The rest of 1.A. must do someone else. But note please: The section "Nuclear Blast did not promote the album, which consequently sold badly" can not be re-written as "Nuclear Blast did not promote the album, due to lack of record sales" because the cause and the consequence are reversed. The bad sales were caused by the bad promotion.
 * I addressed the other concerns and tried to reword the "bad sales" sentence to be more obvious. --Kakofonous (talk) 23:35, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * The sentence is fine. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:46, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 1.B. I am not sure where the comma should be and where not.
 * I think I've fixed this. --Kakofonous (talk) 23:35, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:46, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 2.B. I've red the sources word by word - they do cover it all.
 * Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:46, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 4. I am also not sure how to rewrite this
 * I removed the sentence, as it didn't seem to add much to one's overall understanding of the article and the band. --Kakofonous (talk) 23:35, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * And what is your opinion about this edit?
 * To someone who understands musical terminology, the sentence is perfectly understandable, however, it may need to be rewritten for a more general audience. --Kakofonous (talk) 23:35, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree, it may need to be re-written. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:46, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
 * After taking another look at the section, it doesn't really seem to me that this sentence is necessary. If all agree, it might be a better idea to leave it out. --Kakofonous (talk) 00:57, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Agreed. Well, after reading the article, I have gone off and passed the article. Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you to all who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:37, 21 June 2008 (UTC)

--  LYKANTROP   23:04, 19 June 2008 (UTC)