Talk:Mesrop Taghiadian/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 14:13, 3 August 2023 (UTC)

Happy to review the article. AM

Lead section / infobox

 * The lead needs to be expanded to make it more of “a summary of its most important contents” (WP:LEAD).
 * now part of India – amend to ‘now modern Kolkata’ (here and in the following section).

1 Biography

 * Unlink Paris; India (MOS:OL).
 * Give the full name for Grotius. Ditto Shakespeare; Chesterfield.
 * ' 'They had two sons together, both of whom died at a young age'' – consider amending to something like ‘Both their sons died at a young age’.
 * Amend De veritate religionis Christianae within De veritate religionis Christianae.
 * second son died – has this not been mentioned already?
 * After the death of his wife – seems redundant, and so can be edited out.
 * ' 'in Constantinople'' – amend to ‘there’ to improve the prose slightly.
 * was targeted for persecution - ‘was persecuted’ sounds better imo.
 * Can this be subdivided to help readers?
 * Link Poghos Gharadaghtsi (Poghos Gharadaghtsi); folk songs (Armenian folk music); deacon; Ottoman (Ottoman Empire); scholarship; master's degree; clerical (Clergy); missionaries; peddler; pedagogical (Pedagogy); diaspora (Armenian diaspora); novel; seminary; monks.

2 Views and style

 * Romantic is a duplicate link.
 * Link patriotic ideals (Patriotism); dialect; European colonialism (History of colonialism, European is possibly redundant).
 * Great Britain – ‘the British’ (or the United Kingdom’).

3 Works

 * The section lacks citations.

4 Notes

 * Note a needs a citation.

7 External links

 * Amend the text to something like ‘List of works by Mesrop Taghiadian’ from the Greenstone digital library collection

On hold
I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 13 August to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 15:56, 5 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Dear Amitchell125, thank you for taking the time to review this article. I have applied your recommendations. Please let me know if I missed anything. Best, Revolution Saga (talk) 14:07, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

Passing
Passing the article, many thanks for your work, and congratulations! Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 15:12, 9 August 2023 (UTC)