Talk:Metal-poor

In the past couple years, teams of scientists have been targeting these oldest stars in the HK objective-prism survey y Tim C. Beers and collaborators and the Hamburg-ESO survey of Norbert Christlieb and collaborators, originally started for faint quasars.
 * Am I the only one that can't make heads or tails of this? This sentence made sense before it was expanded to its current form. Also I changed the last sentence in the same paragraph to make it, IMO, read better.