Talk:Metal Wolf Chaos/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 22:31, 2 July 2018 (UTC)

I remember reviewing Clock Tower for you. Good times. Cognissonance (talk) 22:31, 2 July 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * absurd and exaggerated "absurd" reads like WP:POV, "exaggerated" is more appropriate per the last Reception paragraph.

Plot

 * Note b requires more than one source to justify the word "Critics".

Development and release

 * with a Japanese player base primarily in mind "primarily" keeps the sentence from being easily read.
 * terrorism themes Weird. I suggest "themes of terrorism".

Overall
You do really good work. Metal Wolf Chaos has too few flaws to not immediately pass. Congrats! Cognissonance (talk) 11:40, 3 July 2018 (UTC)