Talk:Metals in medicine

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Hello! I came across this article for an assignment for class and did an evaluation of the article. I think a few edits that would improve the flow of the article would be to put the Metal anemia section before the Toxic metals. I think having the good uses of metals in the body makes the article seem less intimidate to the reader and emphasize that there are essential uses of metals in the body. I also think that all of the content may be in the four sources, but more references to which source provided specific facts would be helpful to the reader. It appears to be plagiarism with the lack of references throughout the article, but when looking through the sources all of the content in the article may be int he sources. Overall, the article was easy to follow and each section was well elaborated on to present the topic.Blacksheep109 (talk) 19:40, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: CHEM 4610 F22
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