Talk:Meteorological history of Hurricane Noel/GA1

GA Review
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Just a few grammar and MOS fixes are needed here:
 * (1-minute sustained) should be (sustained one minute).
 * Date format should be consistent throughout ("22 October" vs. "October 23")
 * "The low pressure area dropped heavy " dropped-->produced?
 * "By six hours after formation" remove By
 * "with some rainbands to its south" some-->several
 * "began paralleling the northeastern " paralleling-->moving parallel to
 * Make all times consistent throughout.

I believe the article meets the rest of the criteria. This will go on hold until you fix the above concerns. Good luck, Malinaccier (talk) 01:22, 28 August 2008 (UTC)