Talk:Metropolitan Life Insurance Company Tower/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 03:27, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  03:27, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Architecture

 * constructed in 1905–1909. [...] in 1953–1957. "In" doesn't work here since this is not an x>12 span of time.
 * ✅ though I don't understand what you mean by "an x>12 span of time". Is that referring to years? epicgenius (talk) 14:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Edit. Oops. I meant months there. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  21:50, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * many 19th-century early skyscrapers Unwieldy; I recommend removing "19th-century".
 * provided by Hedden Construction Company. the Hedden Construction Company
 * The bells were the highest [...] The bells are respectively Change this up.
 * from which a "magnificent" Delete the last word here.
 * they were split up into different social hierarchies, with immigrants in service jobs; women in seamstresses' and cleaners' jobs; and native-born workers of both genders in white-collar jobs. Replace the semicolons with commas.
 * from which a "magnificent" Delete the last word here.
 * they were split up into different social hierarchies, with immigrants in service jobs; women in seamstresses' and cleaners' jobs; and native-born workers of both genders in white-collar jobs. Replace the semicolons with commas.
 * they were split up into different social hierarchies, with immigrants in service jobs; women in seamstresses' and cleaners' jobs; and native-born workers of both genders in white-collar jobs. Replace the semicolons with commas.
 * they were split up into different social hierarchies, with immigrants in service jobs; women in seamstresses' and cleaners' jobs; and native-born workers of both genders in white-collar jobs. Replace the semicolons with commas.

History

 * in 1903–1905 See above.
 * In 1982, Cross & Brown Company the Cross & Brown Company.
 * In 1982, Cross & Brown Company the Cross & Brown Company.

GA progress
Article passes Copyvio scanner without issue. Images are all free and relevant, too. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  04:27, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of these issues. epicgenius (talk) 14:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)