Talk:Mexican National Atómicos Championship/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
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Lead

 * "The title is a national title," - repetition of "title"
 * "In early 2009 reigning champions," - early 2009, the reigning champions,

Championship rules

 * "The title is a national title" - same issue as the first point raised in the lead section
 * "As is the case for all the Mexican National titles," - every Mexican national title,
 * "The championship is also an Atómicos championship," - repetition of "championship"
 * "it meant that officially non-Mexican citizens were prohibited from challenging or holding the championship," - it offically prohibited non-Mexican citizens from challenging or holding the championship,
 * "which means there is no champion at that point in time." - holder
 * "or real-life issues like a champion suffering an injury" - such as

History

 * "The first champions were crowned after an eight-team tournament that saw Pierroth Jr., Villano III, Villano IV, and Villano V become the inaugural champions" - winners
 * "Over the next couple of years" - How many years exactly?
 * "trade the championship between the two teams." - typo; should be traded
 * "won the championship, ending the Los Vipers/Los Vatos Locos dominance of the championship. [t]" - title
 * Plus the note in the sentence above should not have a space between it and the period to end the sentence
 * "kicking off a 789-day reign." - beginning
 * "only for a reorganized Black Family, now known as La Secta del Mesias ("The Sect of the Messiah"), won the championship on May 20, 2007." - to claim the title
 * "in storyline terms because they attacked Vampiro after winning the championship." - in a storyline where they attacked
 * "such as the atómicos championship," - the word in bold should be italized

Reigns

 * "left AAA in the fall of 1996." - avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
 * "the championship was inactive for over a year until a tournament" - more than a year

Mexican National Atómicos Championship tournament (1996)

 * "Documentation for the full brackets of the tournament has not been found documented," - the word in bold isn't needed
 * "but based on the results 10 teams competed in the tournament to determine the first-ever champions." - inaugural
 * "After initial rounds on August 3 and August 4, 1996," - the inital rounds of August 3 to 4,
 * "on their way to the finals." - en route
 * "first round" in the able should begin with capital letters with the first letter only

Mexican National Atómicos Championship tournament (1998)

 * All mentions of the word Atómicos in this section should be capalized
 * "and for approximately a year and a half" - 1½ years
 * "In round two, on August 13, 198," - the year isn't needed since it is already mentioned in this paragraph
 * "In round two," - the next round,

Title history

 * "and Dark Ozz (3))" - only one closing parentheses is needed