Talk:Mexican National Cruiserweight Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:19, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:19, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "From its creation in 1983, it was not promoted by one specific promotion but shared between many Mexican promotions primarily" - From its establishment in 1983, no one promotion promoted the championship but was shared between several Mexican promotions, and not exclusively by Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL).
 * "Being a professional wrestling championship, it is not won legitimately: it is instead won via a scripted ending to a match" - it was not won legittimately but via a scripted ending to a match
 * "Crusierweight" does not need to begin with a capital letter
 * "defeating Insolito in the final match." - just the final. will suffice
 * "In the mid-1990s AAA gained control of the championship when then-champion" - when title holder
 * The two mentions of Blue Demon, Jr don't need the comma in the name
 * "took full control of all aspects of the Championship." - took full control of the championship. is simpler and concise
 * "The title was barely defended since between the early 2000s and when it was officially vacated by AAA on December 8, 2008." - The title was seldom defended since from the early 2000 and it was offically vacated by AAA on December 8, 2008.

History

 * "allowing the Universal Wrestling Association (UWA) host a tournament for the inaugural champion." - the Universal Wrestling Association (UWA) to host
 * "Records are unclear on who participated in the tournament," - as to who
 * "In 1992, then-reigning champion" - the reigning holder
 * "as he was injured and thus unable to defend the title." - because of an injury that meant he was unable to defend the title.
 * "only to give it up in November" - relinquish
 * "as he stopped working as Karis la Momia and instead began working as La Parka Jr." - changed his ring name to La Parka Jr.
 * "La Parka Jr. would later regain the championship" - changed the word in bold to he to avoid having the last work of the previous sentence like this
 * Wikilink the first mention of La Parka Jr. in this section

Reigns

 * La Parka Jr does not need to be linked here
 * "A total of twelve wrestlers have held the championship throughout its history, with only one person having held it twice, La Parka Jr., who first won the championship" - repetition of the word "championship"
 * "there were plans to bring it back in February 2013," - revive it
 * "La Parka Jr.'s second reign set a longevity record, lasting 3,591 days, from 1999 until 2008. The shortest reign belonged to Charro de Jalisco, who held it for 65 days." - These two sentences are missing reliable source(s) to verify if they are correct

Rules

 * "The lucha libre commissions" - typo; should be commission's
 * "Cruiserweight" does not need to begin with a capital letter
 * "a promotion declared the championship vacant, which meant there was no champion at that point in time." - repetition of "champion"
 * "This was either due to a storyline,[d] or real-life issues such as a champion suffering an injury being unable to defend the championship," - same issue as above

Title history

 * The 17th column that has the word "vacated" in the table needs to be referenced to reliable source(s) just like the others