Talk:Mexican National Women's Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 25 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Lead

 * "(Campeonato Nacional Femenil in Spanish)" - rewrite as (Campeonato Nacional Femenil)
 * women's professional wrestling and female wrestlers are linked to the same article. The second one should be removed

History

 * "when US wrestlers Mac Stein" - change to United States for consistency
 * "1930s and 1940s." - replace the period with a comma
 * "who won a tournament in Monterrey, Nuevo León" - remove Nuevo León because it is unnecessary
 * "The title would later be won by Irma González on a show held in the el Toreo de Cuatro Caminos bullfighting arena in Naucalpan, State of Mexico." - remove this because it is a reptition of the same sentence before it
 * "leading to researches concluding that it was most likely González Women's Championship that was defended." - researchers and the last part of this sentence is very confusing. Please clarify
 * "The championship lineage From" - remove the captial F and replace with the same letter but in lowercase
 * "Mexico City ban of women's wrestling" - on
 * "is unclear and for large stretches of time undocumented." - is unclear and was undocumented for a long period of time
 * "based on the fact that she was the reigning Mexican Women's Championship," - Champion
 * "to promote the championship and determine who should challenge or win the championship." - reptition of championship
 * "instead promoters holding shows in Mexico City could petition the commission to have the champion work their show" - work on their show

Reigns

 * "she's the 19th champion since the Mexico City Boxing and Wrestling Commission sanctioned the championship," - she is
 * "and the 28th documented champion over all." - over all is one word
 * "2 reigns combine" - 2 must be spelt out

Rules

 * Tokyo, Japan should just be Tokyo