Talk:Mexico at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 20:31, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

Review
Hello. Happy to start this review! I think the article is ripe for promotion. I just need to check its grammar and go through the sources. One thing that caught my eye is that there are no sources in Spanish (not the editor's fault, but I still want to do some digging to see if more information can be used to update the article). This is not a requirement for GAs, since it appears to cover 3a and 3b criterias (addresses main topic and stays on topic). But I'll know more when I start reading and researching. Either way, nice job here! I'll post the review soon. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 20:31, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I tried to look for Spanish sources, but failed to find anything too relevant, would love if you found something to add! Courcelles (talk) 20:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

Background

 * – He is linked in the section after this, but not here. I would link it here and remove the link that follows. I would also link alpine skiing for those unfamiliar with it.

Disability classification

 * – I feel like this is better in parenthesis or in a footnote. If you write it as "... though there is often overlap between this and other categories" it should work too.


 * – Link Les autres, since I doubt many readers will know what it is. Since it is the last classification, add an "and" before "Les autres".


 * – I think the word "like" instead of "for example" sounds better here, but I'll leave it up to you.

Alpine skiing

 * – Remove link as previously stated, and keep surname only.


 * – Wow. That's crazy.