Talk:Meyn Food Processing Technology

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 * 1) Article seems good at first impression. [|Link]

Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:20, 27 May 2019 (UTC)

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Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:20, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) References need to be changed: #6 (Wiki, not reliable), #7 (Altor, not independent), #8 (Interview with company employee, not independent).
 * 2) Images on Commons need to be verified: File:Eieren_kisten_1959.png and File:Apollo_1970.png (source is municipality archive; need proof of free use in draft, or supply reason for fair use after article publication),  File:Meyn%27s_office_in_the_USA.png and File:Meyn%27s_office_in_Poland.png and File:Meyn%27s_head_office_in_the_Netherlands.jpg (source is author, submit release form).
 * Hi, images have been updated with the correct data and a release email has been sent by an official representative of the owner for further processing by an OTRS volunteer. Dotsonti  Let's Talk! 13:54, 28 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, the references have been replaced and more have been added with well-established news sources. Dotsonti  Let's Talk! 14:14, 29 May 2019 (UTC)

Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:51, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Rewrite following sentence: "... is one of the world’s largest suppliers of poultry processing solutions.". It is not backed by references.
 * 2) References need to be changed: #2 (Interview and press release, not reliable), #4 (Press release, not reliable). Note: "You can use such sources, but relying on them as heavily as you are, that often ends up in articles that read like advertising and don't demonstrate notability." (Waggie).
 * Hi, I have rewritten the sentence to correctly summarize the content of the references used, it also results in a more neutral summary. Dotsonti  Let's Talk! 09:29, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, I have removed the references and revised the text based on new references. Dotsonti  Let's Talk! 09:29, 7 June 2019 (UTC)