Talk:Mi Mayor Venganza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

I will start this today! --K. Peake 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after fifth studio album
 * "by Isidro Infante and released as" → "by Isidro Infante, and released as"
 * You need to add the genre in comp as salsa with a source, rather than merely having a mention of it in reception
 * "song in which La India tells the woman" → "song, in which La India tells the woman"
 * The lead is out of order after the above sentence; critical reception should come first, then the accolade followed by commercial performance and finally the music video
 * "for the track features" → "for the song features"
 * "was praised by two music critics while" → "were praised by two music critics, while"
 * "peaked at number four and one" → "peaked at numbers four and one"
 * "It was a recipient of" → "The song was a recipient of"

Background and composition

 * A colon is not needed after five singles
 * Remove comma before Jazzin'
 * "and arranger, Isidro Infante, signed on to" → "and arranger Isidro Infante signed with"
 * "produced by Infante whom" → "produced by Infante, whom"
 * "and is her" → "and is La India's"
 * Remove comma after "Mi Mayor Venganza"
 * Add a sentence with a source clarifying the song itself is salsa, also add more comp info if you can
 * "Jerry Rivera and" → "Jerry Rivera, and"

Promotion and reception

 * Remove wikilink on RMM Records
 * "was for the song filmed" → "for the song was filmed"
 * "lauded La India's vocals stating her" → "lauded La India's vocals, stating her"
 * "energizes the track."" → "energizes the track"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * No speech marks are used to end the "comes through like a champ..." quote
 * The award should come directly before commercial performance
 * "Commercially "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number 4" → "Commercially, "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number four" per MOS:NUM
 * Remove pipe on Billboard
 * "it ended 1998 ranked" → "the song ended 1998 ranked as"

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed after this quick review! --K. Peake 18:58, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake Thanks as always for your reviews! I believe I have addressed all the issues brought up, let me know if there's any I missed. Erick (talk) 16:48, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, there was one grammatical mistake but I smoothened it out totally! --K. Peake 07:28, 29 June 2022 (UTC)