Talk:Mi Tierra/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 17:48, 12 February 2014 (UTC)

Nominator: Erick

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  17:48, 12 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written
 * a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

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 * 5) ** Major Point 1: Background "Produced by husband Emilio Estefan, it is her first Spanish-language album and pays homage to her Cuban roots." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 6) ** Major Point 2: Recording and production "The album features Cuban musical genres, including boleros, danzan and son music. Recorded at Crescent Moon Studios in Miami, Florida, Mi Tierra features notable Latin musicians such as Arturo Sandoval, Cachao López and Paquito D'Rivera." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 7) ** Major Point 3: Musical style and songs "" (not in the lead, OK)
 * 8) ** Major Point 4: Commercial reception "The album was an international success, selling eight million copies worldwide as of 2006. In the United States it was the first record to reach number one on the Billboard Top Latin Albums chart, and peaked at number twenty-seven on the Billboard 200 chart. Mi Tierra has sold over one million copies in the US and Spain." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 9) ** Major Point 5: Critical reception and accolades "The album received favorable reviews from critics, who praised the album's production, songs and Estefan's vocals. Its success won the singer a Grammy Award for Best Tropical Latin Album. Mi Tierra spawned seven singles: "Mi Tierra", "Con Los Años Que Me Quedan", "Tradición", "Montuno", "¡Sí Señor!...", "Mi Buen Amor" and "Ayer"." (summarised well in the lead)
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 * 11) ** Major Point 1: Background "Produced by husband Emilio Estefan, it is her first Spanish-language album and pays homage to her Cuban roots." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 12) ** Major Point 2: Recording and production "The album features Cuban musical genres, including boleros, danzan and son music. Recorded at Crescent Moon Studios in Miami, Florida, Mi Tierra features notable Latin musicians such as Arturo Sandoval, Cachao López and Paquito D'Rivera." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 13) ** Major Point 3: Musical style and songs "" (not in the lead, OK)
 * 14) ** Major Point 4: Commercial reception "The album was an international success, selling eight million copies worldwide as of 2006. In the United States it was the first record to reach number one on the Billboard Top Latin Albums chart, and peaked at number twenty-seven on the Billboard 200 chart. Mi Tierra has sold over one million copies in the US and Spain." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 15) ** Major Point 5: Critical reception and accolades "The album received favorable reviews from critics, who praised the album's production, songs and Estefan's vocals. Its success won the singer a Grammy Award for Best Tropical Latin Album. Mi Tierra spawned seven singles: "Mi Tierra", "Con Los Años Que Me Quedan", "Tradición", "Montuno", "¡Sí Señor!...", "Mi Buen Amor" and "Ayer"." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
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 * 18) *** "Mi Tierra (English: My Homeland) is the third studio album by Cuban-American recording artist Gloria Estefan, released on June 14, 1993 by Epic Records."
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2: Verifiable with no original research
 * a. Has an appropriate reference section: Yes
 * b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with other FAs – Romances & Fijación Oral, Vol. 1)

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3: Broad in its coverage

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4: Neutral

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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes

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Erick, I'm very happy and inspired to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article :
 * "In "Ayer" ("Yesterday") the singer finds a flower given her by a lover and yearns for him to return, since life is short." (1a issue)
 * Corrected to "given to her".
 * ""¡Sí Señor" ("Yes Sir!") is another son track featured on the album." (I think the genre Son montuno should be linked here rather than later? Or it should be clarified.)
 * Son montuno is a subgenre of son music.

Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. Please feel free to strike out any recommendation from this review which you think will not help in improving the article which is our main aim here. All the best, --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  16:51, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review! Erick (talk) 19:37, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Erick, very much for your diligence, care and precision in writing such great articles. --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  01:03, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

Promoting the article to GA status. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  01:03, 17 February 2014 (UTC)