Talk:Mi Tierra (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

You deserve another review, so here it is! --K. Peake 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add a comma instead of in after the studio name in the infobox
 * "and the artist with her husband" → "and the artist, with her husband"
 * "handling its production. It was" → "handling the production. The song was"
 * Add a comma after music critics
 * "Commercially, it topped the" → "Commercially, the song topped the" because this is a new para
 * Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "on several European countries. " → "on several European countries' listings."
 * "by Alberto Tolot features the artist" → "by Alberto Tolot and features Gloria Estefan" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * ""Mi Tierra" received several accolades including the" → ""Mi Tierra" received the" since it only won these three awards
 * Shouldn't this sentence be the first of the para instead?
 * "at the Billboard Latin Music Awards and" → "at the Billboard Latin Music Awards, and" also, you should mention that the first two were in 1994 and the second was in 1995
 * Remove the Puerto Rican singers introduction, as this is not needed in the lead

Background and composition

 * Wikilink Gloria Estefan
 * Pipe Latin to Latin music
 * Pipe salsa to Salsa music
 * "by her son, Nayib;" → "by her son Nayib;"
 * "by Estefan's husband, Emilio Estefan, and" → "by Gloria's husband Emilio Estefan and" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * "of the album's songs including" → "of the album's songs, including"
 * ""Mi Tierra" is a" → "Musically, "Mi Tierra" is a"

Critical reception and accolades

 * "called it "genius"." → "called the song "genius"."
 * "On the club remix, he said it's" → "Of the club remix, he said it is"
 * Italicise The Daily Vault
 * "it was the only track" → ""Mi Tierra" was the only track"
 * "called it a" → "called "Mi Tierra" a"
 * "rated it three out of five," → "rated the song three out of five," and mention stars if this is the ratings system used
 * Remove pipe on Latin
 * Shouldn't you write Record Mirror instead of RM?
 * "described it as" → "described the song as"
 * "It was acknowledged as" → "The song was acknowledged as"

Promotion and commercial performance

 * "was directed Alberto Tolot" → "was directed by Alberto Tolot"
 * Shouldn't you write 14th instead of fourteenth studio album?
 * "in 1994 where she" → "in 1994, where she"
 * The Latin Recording Academy → the Latin Recording Academy per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "In the US, it reached" → "In the United States, the song reached" per MOS:US
 * "it reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the Billboard Hot Dance Club Songs charts ." → "the song reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the Hot Dance Club Songs charts, respectively."
 * "number seventy-seven on" → "number 77 on" per MOS:NUM
 * Pipe Media Control to GfK Entertainment charts
 * "twenty-seventh on the" → "27th on the"
 * Pipe Mega Single Top 100 to Dutch Single Top 100
 * "in Netherlands and thirty-sixth" → "in the Netherlands, and 36th"

Formats and track listings

 * Retitle to Track listing since there is only one format or listing here

Charts

 * Good

Personnel

 * Move this to being the section directly before charts

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; slick job here once again! --K. Peake 10:15, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks as always for the review. For the charts refs, I just decided to just reuse the refs from the chart tables (which is what I should've done in the first place!). Erick (talk) 18:59, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * You missed the first three points of infobox and lead. Clarifying the first, I meant to write Crescent Moon Studios, Miami, Florida. --K. Peake 16:12, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I saw your mention through the article page and everything has been implemented! --K. Peake 07:07, 27 January 2023 (UTC)